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“Haruhi, what is that!”
Haruhi looks up from her book, bored and aggravated. It's a nice day out. A very nice day, actually, and earlier on, she'd decided to spend her free time doing homework. The campus is fairly large, so she figured she’d have no problem finding somewhere she could have some peace and quiet. She’d been right. Just behind the ( Read more... )
Haruhi looks up from her book, bored and aggravated. It's a nice day out. A very nice day, actually, and earlier on, she'd decided to spend her free time doing homework. The campus is fairly large, so she figured she’d have no problem finding somewhere she could have some peace and quiet. She’d been right. Just behind the ( Read more... )
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You own at life and keep me from homework.
But I still have hours because I'm not sleeping tonight. 8D;
Anywayanyway. "pontificates?" HO NOES. I do not ever ever ever want to see, like, Tamaki and Xenmas COLLABORATING on anything. IT WOULD NEVER END. EVER. D8;
So this is wonderful and awesome, and it's like the imported coffee thing! Except chocolate and written and CAITLAN! And, and, and, 8D, the cavity episode. Eeeee. ♥
One thing - you accidentally went to past tense for a few lines. Even when you say "The day was," it's like... well, it's still that day at the time, so it should be "The day is." Present tense always fucks me over like that too. But just look it over quickly and it'll be perfect.
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By the way~ did you read all the crap I posted? XD; I don't need comments because I'll be ffnet-ing them eventually anyway, but I just want to know if you read them.
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