She dropped the poured her two boxes of cereal into a bowl... not sure if a typo or if you do like me and leave words out from trying to get it all down so fast. XD
I love it. I can't wait to read what happens next, and I laughed out loud at gnome shaman. There so needs to be gnome shamans. They could turn into puppies instead of wolves. omghowcutewouldthatbe.
yeah that would be a typo - brain moving faster than fingers. I can't wait to see what happens next since I'm just sort of stream-of-consiousing it. haha
Your beginning with the "hook" first line and the gaming is excellent.
I love the "looking for group" in the real world meaning "looking for ride" and the description of a typical college afternoon. And boy, do you recall college life accurately--things such as roommate conversations and the guys coming down the stairs all chorusing, "Hi Tasha's roommmate!"
Thanks! Yeah, I'm totally just writing and not thinking too hard about it. I'm hoping a story with actual conflict will emerge as I go. I need to work on fleshing Jane out a little bit more...
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I love it. I can't wait to read what happens next, and I laughed out loud at gnome shaman. There so needs to be gnome shamans. They could turn into puppies instead of wolves. omghowcutewouldthatbe.
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Your beginning with the "hook" first line and the gaming is excellent.
I love the "looking for group" in the real world meaning "looking for ride" and the description of a typical college afternoon. And boy, do you recall college life accurately--things such as roommate conversations and the guys coming down the stairs all chorusing, "Hi Tasha's roommmate!"
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