Meeting in the Middle, Chapter 2: Do We Not Bleed?

[orange_crush42]

I'm submitting this to Ashwinder tonight, but what the hell, you all can have it now. Reviews are love! :)

Title: Meeting in the Middle
Chapter 2: Do We Not Bleed?
Genres: Romance/Drama/Angst
Word count: 1,175
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Graphic gore, cursing (thus far)
Summary: After the Final Battle, Hermione agrees to an unusual request in order

Comments

[surfmistress]

Loved this just as much as the first. I know it might sound bizarre, but that was a great way to tell of the battle. Just those little snippets of horror that Hermione was remembering made much more of an impact for me than telling it all in graphic detail.

How funny that Poppy tells her she might get Severus get talk when no one else can and goads him into a response.

[mayhemechild19]

Ooh, I'm getting very curious as to what has happened to everyone. Love the way you told the battle.

One tiny little note: I think you meant Foe Glass, not Sneakoscope. But, that's just me being picky.

Love it, please write more!

[orange_crush42]

oooh, you are so right about the Foe Glass. I don't know what I was thinking! Well, I better go fix that before it gets to the front of the queue at Ashwinder. Thanks for the heads up!

[lisianpeia]

Don't be terrified darlignm, it's going great and you are making curious about the story!
Keep on the good writting and have a nica week!

[lady_of_clunn]

Poor Snape!

All that bloodloss is scaring me.

Now I am VERY curious as to how Hermione will helphim...

Great chapter!