Flash Fic: "Piece of Her" 1/1 (Cara/Dahlia, Legend of the Seeker)

[orange_creative]

Title: Piece of Her
Author: orange_creative
Fandom: Legend of the Seeker
Pairing(s): Cara/Dahlia, implied one-sidedKahlan/Cara
Rating: PG
Summary: charrua33's prompt in my summer fic project. Prompt under the cut.
Spoilers: Through the S2 finale, to be safe.
word count: 420
A/N: AUish. Unbeta'ed.
Disclaimer: Copyrights associated with Legend of the Seeker and the Sword

Comments

[mayireadtoday]

Wonderful.

Great lines: "It never occurred to Kahlan that Cara might not need her anymore.
[...]
She hadn't even realized that she had lost that little piece of Cara that she coveted."

[orange_creative]

Thanks. <3

[rhyfeddu]

Oh, nice to see one where it's Kahlan who's pining somewhat. It's so easy to cast Cara in that role. Sweet. :) Equal time angst!

And you brought Dahlia back into the Merry Band... You know, I wouldn't mind if you expanded on this set up. *cough*

[meatisadelicacy]

yes! this! as much as i love kahlan, and i sooo do, this is a nice booyah!

[orange_creative]

It's tempting, isn't it? >.>

[individual_68]

awesome, I love the last line.

really well written, thanks for making me smile :D

[orange_creative]

Thank you! I'm glad I got a smile outta ya. :D

[orange_creative]

I didn't expect it to be a little angsty, but I do love me some heart-clenching. ;)

[starbuck1980]

Love this! Oh it's just so good... I love how Kahlan is jealous. lol

Stupid Richard... He is a bit gay, he needs a bf!

[labellamafia494]

I love how Kahlan is jealous
This! Same here. It's also believable jealousy that doesn't negate her history with Richard - just a pang of "something" lost.

Kudos!! I hope to see more from you!

[orange_creative]

I'll hopefully be writing more! I'm so *flail* over this fandom. Thanks for the comments, much appreciated.

[orange_creative]

Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading. :)