Fic: "For Want of a Nail" 3/? (Cara/Kahlan, Legend of the Seeker)

[orange_creative]

Title: For Want of a Nail
Author: orange_creative
Fandom: Legend of the Seeker
Pairing(s): Cara/Kahlan
Rating: R
Summary: The Spell of Undoing changed much more than ever expected.
Spoilers: Through the S2 finale, but this is a completely AU verse. Very AU, but so very familiar.
word count: 5,300
A/N: I should mention that Kahlan will not make an appearance for

Comments

[chaotic_fuse81]

Aww, Berdine and Raina as the little kiddies. <3

This is fantastic, all around.

[orange_creative]

Thanks! I'm glad you like it. :)

[mdknight3000]

Great chapter. Awww. Raina and Berdine as little innocent girls. How sweet. And I really like competent smart Dahlia. Like the above poster I don't want her to die either. You are doing a great job of keeping the tension of what is going to happen really high. I was afraid you'd quit writing this as I really liked it from the moment I started the first chapter. Heck you made crazy masochistic full on Mord Sith Denna likable. She will probably come to a bad end too but I hope not. Can't wait for more.

[orange_creative]

Sorry it took so long! I had some terribad side-tracking going on, but for what it's worth, I'm committed to seeing this through. Glad you like Denna because I ♥ her so.

Thank you so much for the feedback!

[jaws_of_fenrir]

Mini Berdine and Raina - Awesome! I'm positively filled with dread though since you've listed it as a C/K story - this simply can't turn out well for Dahlia. *blink* I'm a wee bit concerned about B&R too. The angst forecast is looking grim!

Great story and totally worth the wait between updates, I hope there are lots more to come.

[orange_creative]

I've completely addicted myself to mini!Berdine&Raina, so I'm glad other people are liking what I did with them so far. As much as I'd love to talk about what happens next, I'm keeping my lips sealed. ;)

However, I can tell you that there's lots and lots yet to come. Thanks for reading!

[areader221]

Impressive! Agree with your nickname Orange_creative - you are very creative, indeed.
I liked all your characters, even Triana-bitch, oops. Cara is so awesome- MS deserter (!) who is to survive for her unborn child, and young hero Cara who had changed Dahlia’s fate. Cara/Denna have such fascinating relationship. Berdine and Raina are little girls, so cute <3!
Your Dahlia is so smart, strong and loving-I already feel sad for her…I suspect that she can’t have a break in that AU :( I just hope she will be happy with Cara at least for sometime.
Thank you very much for sharing your brilliant story!

[orange_creative]

Awwh, thanks! You're very generous.

I'm glad you like Triana too, because I love all the characters so far. It has been crazy fun writing this.

I really appreciate your feedback, thanks again! :)

[krockwise]

-"You forget what I am," (...)
-"Is that why you were taken? (...) And I wasn't?"

Cara you 've got a very special place in the heart of this woman ;)

Love this couple, but why is there written Cara/kahlan in the introduction of the fic ? An error ? or may we fear for Dalia's health ????

Waiting for the next chapter!

[orange_creative]

It's definitely a Cara/Kahlan fanfic. There's a little note that she won't be appearing for a while because this is kind of a long epic adventure story rather than just a romance. I hope you enjoy the rest! Thanks for the feedback.