FIC: Lost Boys 7

Sep 01, 2006 10:40

Title: Lost Boys.
Author: ophelia7rose
Rating: NC-17
Fandom: Queer as Folk (US)
Pairing: Brian/Mikey
Summary: Michael starts a new job at an advertising agency deciding not to tell anyone that his new boss was once his best friend in high school, assuming that Brian won’t remember him anyway. But how could Brian forget the only person who ever made him feel ( Read more... )

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anonymous September 1 2006, 10:43:41 UTC
Bravo!!! Wonderful ending, hon. So glad that Michael realized just how conditional David's love was and went right to the one that love him unconditionally. Loved how Brian was trying to fight it and rationalize while really admitting his love. Great job, dear. Can't wait to see more from you. *hint, hint*

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hotforkinney September 1 2006, 10:52:59 UTC
Okay, this comment was from me. LJ decided to log me out too, and I didn't notice it until after I posted this. I know there's a way to go back in and fix it, but I just can't remember and don't have the time right now to try to figure it out. I'm off to work. Just know that I love your work.

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ophelia7rose September 1 2006, 11:02:59 UTC
lol, LJ is being tricky today, it did that to my twice.
Have a good day at work *hugs*

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ophelia7rose September 1 2006, 11:02:10 UTC
Than you babe, I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
I just sat down and wrote out a brief summary for the next story. I seem to be on a fluff kick right now :)

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screaminglisa September 1 2006, 12:25:15 UTC
Amazing :) Wow, I loved this story so much. You have such a talent with words, there are a couple of lines in here that are absolutely priceless: " They’re put there to make us want to settle down, reproduce, or in the case of us fags, adopt a nice little Chinese baby, but that’s all it is" OR "They were doomed to a future of golf and Ikea but it had to be better than never having him at all." <<- I just had to giggle at those :)

I've got to say that you've really nailed Brian's character in this final chapter. His whole rant about love being nothing but chemicals and eventually being stuck in a loveless relationship for life is so very HIM. I think I've never read an explanation for his "I don't do love" attitude which was as good as this one. There was just something about it that really grabbed me - wonderful passage.

I really can't wait to read more of your stories, you are incredibly talented. Keep up the great work!

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ophelia7rose September 2 2006, 09:06:50 UTC
Aww wow I think that's the nicest comment I have ever gotten. Thank you :)

Sadly the chemicals argument is one that I have used myself, though not really believing it for a second.

I'm so glad you liked the story, I have an idea for the next one I just need to tweak it a little, decide when to set it and stuff.

Thanks again for the lovely comment.

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hannurdock September 1 2006, 12:41:30 UTC
Ah, sigh :) A great ending to a great story. Just the way I wanted it to be, you didn't disappoint. Beautiful. Now you just need to write the follow up of them in bed together ;)

Love,
Gina

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ophelia7rose September 2 2006, 09:11:55 UTC
lol, I know I kind of bailed on the sex. But I wrote the ending at Babylon and then I just felt like it was the right place to end it. I promise there will be sex in the next one I write.
I'm glad you liked the story babe :)

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mackeygenius September 1 2006, 17:06:01 UTC
*Sigh*

Marvelous.

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ophelia7rose September 2 2006, 09:20:49 UTC
Thank you very much :)

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sweety167 September 2 2006, 03:53:45 UTC
*lazy smile* that was great, very content. I really liked it.

*happy sigh*

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ophelia7rose September 2 2006, 09:24:52 UTC
Thanks babe, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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