act v, sc iii [oneshot]

[salted_taiyaki]

Title: act v, sc iii
Author: salted_taiyaki
Pairing(s): Jonghyun x Key
Genre: Romance, AU
Rating: PG-15
Warning(s): some rough language
Summary: kim jonghyun doesn't like movie theaters (or movies, at all), but when he meets the theater's popcorn machine runner he begins to have some second thoughts.

a/n: i'm really trying to get myself to write

Comments

[ssm_kiyumi]

This is so cute ♥
Very well written (:

[salted_taiyaki]

thank you! glad you think so ♥ thanks for reading~

[sk_swing]

Lol I'm flipping through my friendslist and suddenly I see this and I'm like WTF ANGIE AREN'T YOU BUSY WITH LIFE?! xD I can understand the feelings you're having, and writing is definitely the best way to deal with them. I went 4 days without producing anything that didn't make me puke but it finally broke (which was good because I totally thought I was washed up and that was the end).

Anyways! On to the quoting!

he felt like flipping the entire candy bar over and flooding the theater with soda so all the viewers would just drown and die
Totally made me giggle. The drown and die part. Because it just seems so....age appropriate xD

(Love wasn't there yet, but Jonghyun was sure it'd be there in a few scenes.)
And I love thiiiis because it ends it so nicely and has a movie reference and I just find it adorable~

[salted_taiyaki]

busy, yes, but i gotta take a break omg ;_______; i can't keep my mind on sat iis (my friends are making fun of me for studying every day sob). and since we're not doing much in english i just thought that i would write to keep my brain going (though i think reading might replace that soon, idefk)
oh god no that would've been horrible D:

i'd think that'd be a really horrible way to die, i mean really.

♥ thank you ~~

[sengseng]

gosh, i just decided to surf for a bit and i'm glad i did that
it's like tons of years waiting for your new fic
i'll check this when i have time
anyway, welcome back, i'm so sure this one a good one too, since i see Jongkey at the very first haha

[salted_taiyaki]

aww thank youu~ haha hope you'll enjoy it when you get to it 8)

[forevershining]

"I have to go feed my dog."

OMFG.

LMAO.

Not cliche at all. (:

"Jonghyun simply smiled, led him out to his car--flashy, a bit too fancy for Kibum's tastes--and rolled up the tinted windows, hoping they wouldn't fog them up (or make the leather wet, or screw up the carpeting, because Jonghyun had paid a lot for that) as their lips locked and tongues slid against each other.

and omg. @.@

That just. hahaha.

Now my mind is wandering off as to what they did at Jonghyun's house. 8D

tysm for writing this, even though I know you're busy~ ♥

[salted_taiyaki]

aha xD

i'm glad you think that ;w;
L O L yeah for some reason i always manage to put something in, esp for pg-15 stories. idk w/e w/e haha

oh we can only imagine ♥
thank you very much for reading, luv!

[miss_circle]

"I have to go feed my dog."

WTF, Jjong? So witty! LOL

Aaaw! I love it very much! Too many witty lines, that I can't even copy them anymore.

Anyway, from my experience, leave the crappy feelings to the betas. Just write without thinking about how crappy it is ;D

[salted_taiyaki]

that came from the, uh, fact that i'm writing another story involving pets...xD;; OTL

thank you very much! aha i don't have a beta, but that would be too burdensome for them ;;;;