ficlet: Singularity [pg] Picard/Crusher for grav_ity

[oparu]

the fantastic grav_ity wanted something post-Nemesis where Beverly and Jean-Luc talk about their shared thoughts on Kesprytt.

And she's been fantastically patient.

Comments

[debbiebiv]

Oh My! That was just beautiful. I really can not say it enough - you have such a gift with your writing.

Thank you for sharing.

[oparu]

thanks very much! I'm glad you liked it. :)

[jacks5170]

Ahhhh, this is really gorgeous. I read it a couple of times.

I think I've maybe said this before, but what I love about your writing is how you find the subtle points that are just below the surface and pull them out. I read it and I see things I realise I knew but never recognised. Like, "he had more than his share of patience. Probably some of hers too." When I read it I think, right, omg that's exactly the way to put that.

Lines like that make me flail with delight.

[oparu]

thanks darling! as long as you're flailing, something's going right. :)

[lylo369]

I really love this so very much. Especially when he says "I've always found your attraction inescapable." and "You're my point of reference."
Like the North Star!
I have always felt like the connection between them was almost like some kind of stellar phenomenon or universal constant...like E=MC2, or how one-plus-one is always two, or how you will always need something the day after you throw it away. There's no real quantifiable way to explain the truth of its existence because it simply IS and it's beautiful and just needs to BE. You captured that so perfectly here and I truly love it.

[oparu]

thanks so much dear! I'm so happy you liked it.

I like making them be science dorks. :)

[oparu]

hooray!! I'm glad you liked it. dorkiness is important. ;)

thanks ducks!

[gypsygem81]

That was adorable and wonderful! Loved the geekspeak!

These two just break my heart.

[oparu]

thanks very much! I love their innate dorkiness.