art (trad.) + ODE (!!?) for muura ♥♥

Jul 13, 2007 04:17

TITLE: oh! that sweet nectar
NAME:
muura 
REQUEST: 01 | Brooke singing an ode to tea (a challenge to writers?!)
RATING/WARNING(S): g for art, pg for brooke's ode because he is (was) a red-blooded male! hurrhurr
ARTIST'S NOTES: oshi-- WHAT NO STOP BEING LATE ARRGHH??, muura i am sorry but the honest truth was i really wanted to do the first request but was totally intimidated by writing an ode and even after writing three two a few, was totally embarassed by awful poetry skillz and eventually made a studly portrait of brooke to accompany awful poem to ease the pain!! I HOPE IT IS EASED.



OH! That sweet nectar of great gods divine,

Take sweet drink and drink deep, Ambrosia

Your fair form (so sumptuous and so fine)

Compels strong men (or gentlemen skeleton)

Tame you not, nigh impossible I say

Irresistible, impenetrable,

Even through fossil'd intestines quite fey

Peeve on mine cheek though I have no stubble

A sailor cast away on ruin'd ship

This wasted (but dapper) figure of mine

Hollow bleach'd bones would for your tender lips

Commit a heinous, well bone-a-fied crime

This I proclaim in the name of tea,

Yet I'd much rather ample busts to see

afsdsfffkll; ilu

NOTE!!: there is a good two inches cut off from this picture that i didn't want to afford crinkling the paper for to squish into the scanner, it was nothing spectacular to be missed out on but just so you know!

also yes that is real ode form (english style, what what) except i cheated by one syllable i think in the first stanza but HEY)
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