Comments | ookami_ryuu: of some more vamp-ficing

ookami_ryuu

of some more vamp-ficing

Jan 13, 2010 14:20

For you then Court. ;) Including the first part of the coffin-scene again as well to make it an uh.. easier read? Gotten just a little bit there and now I'm stuck again. *pout* Feels like that on most of the parts I'm writing in this fic (did a count for myself and I have 6 different places in the story I'm writing on right now *small laugh*). I'm ( Read more... )

the dragon and the wolf, c, vampfic, sasunaru, rambling, fanfiction, naruto

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belledragon January 13 2010, 23:31:57 UTC

Very good stuff! I'm assuming that Naruto was physically yelling and that Sasuke was using telepathy to 'speak' back to him and to help calm him, though it's not obvious that Sasuke is doing that. Until I read your note, I thought that Sasuke was using his speaking voice to talk back and Naruto was confused where it was coming from because he was in the coffin.

Definitely want to know the 'beginning' and lead up to the 'conversion' after the fight. Know you don't plan to write the actual conversion scene but it will be interesting to know what the 'proper' way is in this story vs. how it actually happened and what the consequences are, if any.

Even in bits and pieces, I really like this story and look forward to more!

ookami_ryuu January 14 2010, 01:56:10 UTC

Well a lot of things will be explained in due time in the story. XD (like the proper way of turning vs how they did it) The mental talk will be more obvious, I know it wasn't very obvious now hence me noting that it's mind-convo going on. The whole mental bond and how Sasuke can control Naruto (like here when he 'forces' Naruto to calm down against his will) will also be more explained when I finally start writing those parts. :P ( ... )

belledragon January 14 2010, 02:21:22 UTC

Awesome - you wrote down some 'author's notes' X33. I'd love to see an outline of the whole story - list format or whatever you feel like. Maybe that kind of organizing might help you to get jump started again XD. It sounds like most of the pieces have been figured out, it's just buckling down and getting it all on paper.

Please more... soonish smile-big.

ookami_ryuu January 14 2010, 03:01:05 UTC

Haha yes I do have part 1 and 2 pretty much figured out and I'm sure part 3 will come along later on when I've written some more (just have pretty vague ideas about it, even if it's supposed to be the big 'final' and everything *sweatdrop*).
But yeah you see that's my problem. Even if I have this fic constantly on my brain and I know what's gonna happen and I even have some dialouges and stuff like that in my head... I just can't seem to write it down. *headdesk ( ... )