Lost and Found

Mar 21, 2010 20:50


Request thingy for playswithworms =3

Characters: First Aid and Streetwise (cameos from other P-bots)

Prompt: Lost and Found

Note: Erm, just as a little heads up, this is basically set in the same P-bot universe that playswithworms uses in her stories w>;

Anyways, I’m sorry it took so long! I’ve just had a bunch of college crapola to be working on…. ( Read more... )

request, protectobots, transformers, first aid, streetwise

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playswithworms March 22 2010, 02:11:15 UTC
EEEEEEEE!!!! *claps and cheers*

Oh golly, the dreaded Lost and Found box XD We've got one of those at work, full of socks and hats and water bottles and sunglasses and all manner of thing, and we just keep cramming more stuff in there. Spirit crushingly chaotic indeed!

Hee - I love the explanations for why First Aid and Streets don't get whined at by Groove. *giggles* Streetwise found the dirty pictures XD and earned himself The Look, oh dear :P

And it's so funny and lighthearted and then - gah! Images of Wheeljack and Ratchet, and by their reaction that must mean...waaaahhhhhh ;_; But so sweet that Streetwise's first reaction is to turn it off so they can all look at the pictures together, awwwwwww <33333333333

It is wonderful and sweet and heart-tugging and I love it!!!! ^_^ *hugs*

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onyx17 March 22 2010, 08:17:01 UTC
Yay! I'm so happy you like it <333

Yup, some things never change! That includes which brothers are pushovers and which aren't above using blackmail XD

Well, that's what the little detective gets for being so damn shameless >w>; Particularly in front of Aid!

Yeah, that whole Wheeljack and Ratchet bit kind of wrote itself =S Poor babies are going to need serious huggles in the near future!

I'm really glad enjoyed!!! =3

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eerian_sadow March 22 2010, 23:00:04 UTC
oh, sweeties. from such sweet light hearted banter to such sudden almost sadness. i get that same feeling when i see pictures of my late grandfather.

this was beautiful darling. thanks for sharing.

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onyx17 March 22 2010, 23:04:39 UTC
Aww, thank you very much! I'm very glad you enjoyed it <3

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tainry March 23 2010, 06:02:40 UTC
Cute! And bittersweet, and love Streets! <333

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onyx17 March 23 2010, 08:32:42 UTC
Glad you like! He's such a quirky little police car, ain't he XD

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tv_the_sue March 24 2010, 00:23:51 UTC
*pets the Silly Streetwise* Oh teens.

And awwwww... finding a datapad with captures of their creators... *hugs them*

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onyx17 March 24 2010, 10:41:12 UTC
Teens indeed XD

Yeah, poor babies =[ They'll be needing much huggles in the near future!

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mustardwketchup May 29 2010, 02:31:02 UTC
I actually kinda teared up at the end.... you know, just a little. :)

I'm always a sucker for remembrance stories, and when they feature some of my favorite characters, they're sometimes unreadable, just cause they make me feel too much. XD Besides, Wheeljack and Ratchet belong together!

I love this story, Streetwise is adorable, and very thoughtful. First Aid's cute too!

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onyx17 May 29 2010, 12:52:34 UTC
Awh, I'm sorry! *hugs* I really hate reading and writing angst, so I tried to give it a slightly light-hearted feel. But I guess the angst is still there huh ._.

Yeah, they surely do x3 I'd like to write a continuation to this, but I'm not sure whether I'd screw it up or not. =/

Thanks so much <3333

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mustardwketchup May 29 2010, 14:12:29 UTC
Aww, it's okay. You don't have to if you don't want to..

But if you do, I get first dibs! :) besides the beta of course!

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