broke-down

[onthose_strings]

title broke-down
rating pg-13
pairing sergio ramos/iker casillas
word count 539
prompt 070. storm
note this just hurts. so this is like. therapy. idk.

Comments

[adorerdollylux]

hana i can't breathe

[heyaeroplane]

please breathe my love. i like you breathing and...alive.

i'm like. worried that it was too soon for me to write this. like there maybe isn't enough of a filter between what i'm feeling and what i'm writing at the moment. ugh idk.

[adorerdollylux]

no no the emotion is really pure and painful and honest and god that's my favorite. this feels so... just... yes. painful. it feels almost smothering to me, in just the most exquisite way.

godthesetwo. they just need each other. they just do<3

[heyaeroplane]

good! i'm glad. i just like, can't remove myself from this one, you know? it just hits too close to home. god.

theydo.<3

[_runningmascara]

my heart has constricted but this was so beautiful.
i don't think it's too early for you to write about it (hell i did an hour after, it was just so frustrating you know?). its raw and emotional and perfect

[heyaeroplane]

man, i know. i just like. feel suffocated by it and i had to get this out and then i had this oh no moment of feeling like i hadn't filtered or censored and that this was going to be a pile of emotional yet useless drivel. but seriously, i'm so glad you like it

[_runningmascara]

definitely not useless. there are many others (self included) who feel exacty how you do

[haipollai]

This was beautiful. You captured everything in this I think, especially that horrible frustrated feeling.

[heyaeroplane]

thank you so much

[lady_quark]

Ouh. :'(
I like the emotions it caries with it. So strong.
I've totally fallen in love with the rambling, insecure, desperate and hollow Sergio.
And with Iker's way to handle him ...

(Must admit that me too thought about Sergio bringing the curse to the Bernabeu. Maybe that's just the price we have to pay. Six seasons with the most adorable man on earth for six Champions.League.trophie-less years ... :( )

[heyaeroplane]

ah i'm glad! i kind of just made sergio...myself in this. (too bad i don't have an iker! ^^)

i actually hadn't thought of that! but it's a good point (although i cannot picture real without him anymore, so. hmm) but i was actually referring to his marca interview

[lady_quark]

*sighs*
Who in this world would NOT want to have an Iker? *g*

Ah .. the interview. Yeah. Well ... *facepalm*

[being_georgia]

You concentrate on Sergio, but it's how you write Iker that shows me the pain of what they are going through. Iker's face and what's written on it, all those lines tell the real story.
Beautiful.

[heyaeroplane]

iker's face just speaks volumes, you know? it always always does.
<3