all i have to give

[onthose_strings]

title all i have to give
prompt 005. england
word count 1,987
pairing sergio ramos/fernando torres, fernando torres/olalla dominguez
summary olalla knows what fernando wants for his birthday, so she calls sergio.
notes 100% for adorerdollylux, who convinced me to write porn. this happens very rarely, as some of you may know, but winning the world cup clearly

Comments

[lady_quark]

Oh.

I ususally have to say, that I don't like getting wags involved into this. Especially not as 'knowing wags'. The idea is kind of too difficult to me.
But you made it work in this story.
I like how both of them, Sergio & Olalla, are perfectly clear to each other and fully aware of how much they both mean to Fernando.
And I also like that Sergio is so worried about her.

Lovely fic. Though - somehow - it left me sad ...

[distira]

i usually don't like involving WAGs either, unless it's AU and they aren't actually WAGs. but i'm glad this works for you!

[imyourheroine]

Sergio doesn’t begrudge her for it. He knows how it is, to love Fernando Torres; he could never begrudge her for it.
Uhm, okay, I love you more now. I love that Olalla is part of this. And how you made her out to be. Just, gosh!

And the sex scene is just so well written. Something I could never do.

I love this, thanks! :)

[distira]

i usually don't include WAGs unless it's AU and the WAG in question isn't romantically attached to the footballer. but i'm glad this one worked! i always get nervous when i write them into things.

oh god the sex scene. i never write anything over like, pg-13. well, okay, obviously i do, but so rarely. but i'm glad you liked it!

:] thank you

[yorda_]

I absolutely love your fics and this was no exception <3 And extra love for being so kind to/with Olalla!

[distira]

thank you so much! i'm glad you liked it :]

[dgxku]

Oh wow...

I'm usually not a huge fan of the wag-who-knows, but this! This is just lovely.

And ridiculously hot!

[distira]

thank you so much!

[agarina_bloom]

O_o never thought she would organize a present like that but it works and guh, hot sernando birthday sex is always nice to read, thanks for writing this:D

i also like the idea of olalla and sergio sharing fernando even if it's difficult because they both love him and see that the other makes him happy :)

[distira]

thank you :]