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Fic (Arthur/Merlin): Double Kiss

Nov 17, 2011 15:57

Title: Double Kiss
Author: heavenlyxbodies
Pairing: Arthur/Merlin
Rating: PG13
Feedback: Makes me happy, just play nice
Disclaimer(s) can be found here
Summary: Arthur knew Merlin was magic with a cue, but he’d never expected that magic to light in his eyes or his laugh. He’d never expected the man behind the player.

AN1: Written for Merlin_muses Rd 2
Prompt 4 Merlin plays ( Read more... )

fic: double kiss, :arthur/merlin, kink/warning: fluff/schmoop, comm: merlin_muses, fandom: merlin, ::emerish

Comments 6

misslola89 November 18 2011, 10:33:34 UTC

So cute! I don't usually read AUs and different verses (I'm such a purist!) but there was something in this that sounded interesting so I took a chance and I'm so glad I did! Despite the different setting, they were still very much Merlin & Arthur, you've got their voices down perfectly and their late-night-tea-and-ice-cream-soda chats need to be worked into canon somehow because they're simply adorable :)

heavenlyxbodies November 22 2011, 21:26:28 UTC

Haha, I know the feeling- 'm probably worse (you can't imagine my horror at having written 4 AUs, now *head desk*). Anyway, 'm glad something grabbed you and even happier you enjoyed it that much! Thank you for taking the chance and for commenting. :D

hermitknut November 18 2011, 11:43:29 UTC

This is brilliant fun :D Adorable and witty.

HK

heavenlyxbodies November 22 2011, 21:17:39 UTC

Thank you- for reading and commenting. :) 's much appreciated, lol.

archaeologist_d November 22 2011, 22:08:45 UTC

That was so cute. Loved the non-pickup line. Great job with this.

heavenlyxbodies November 24 2011, 15:27:08 UTC

Thanks, hun, it was disturbingly fun to write. :D