Comments | ontd_ai_gets: Possession -- Chapter 9

dreamsofspike in ontd_ai_gets

Possession -- Chapter 9

Nov 07, 2009 19:17

( “I’ve been thinking.” He spoke at last, his voice soft but unwavering, his gaze focused on the floor across from him. “I’ve been… trying to figure out… what it is that I need from you.” )

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amusedriddler November 9 2009, 03:32:21 UTC

Wow. That was a moving and powerful chapter. I could actually feel Adam's pain. I feel so bad for him. I was wondering what Adam had in mind for Kris. I think you did that part amazing. Really.I liked how Kris had to replay a role in the torture. The way you wrote his thoughts going on at the same time too. Just wow. Thanks.

dreamsofspike November 16 2009, 09:01:28 UTC

thanx so much, hon, i'm glad you found it touching, i needed a way to make kris *really* understand to the point that he would be redeemable... glad it worked ;) *hugs* the next one's up now, hope you enjoy :)