The House of Ruin

May 19, 2011 19:58

Rated: PG, but some bad words
Chapters: One-shot (maybe chapter story?)

A/N: My first story on here... Please go gentle. :) Not entirely sure if I was to continue this. It can end where it is, but... What do you think? Oh, and this is kinda depressing, sorry ( Read more... )

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ext_531986 May 20 2011, 20:49:16 UTC
You wrote about my favorite era, the early days! When they all had no idea what lay in the future, the enormous acclaim which distorted their lives. I love how you capture young John and young Paul (even Mimi), and the language flows nicely. I just wanted to say I really liked your story, and I don't often much read many stories which are strictly John/Paul, because I like George to be included too. But I liked your story anyway, even without George. Thanks for posting, please keep writing here. And Welcome!

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onlywithbuttons May 21 2011, 14:51:00 UTC
Thanks~!! I'm so happy that you liked it!

I'll be sure to write a fic with George! :D

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xhesxmyxloverx June 3 2011, 01:59:47 UTC
I really love this. It was cute, and realistic. Very well done! :)

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onlywithbuttons June 3 2011, 04:57:00 UTC
Thank you~!! :)

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