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weedstakeroot March 7 2011, 10:06:08 UTC
Words cannot describe how much I love Eames, Cobb and Yusuf talking about them both like they're not even there.

“Thank God, you’re okay,” she whispered.

“I’m alright, too!” Eames chimed in helpfully, closing the door behind him, but neither Arthur or Ariadne paid him any attention.

/\ My favourite bit. :D

Thanks for posting this. Sometimes cut scenes are as good as the stuff you leave in. &hearts

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nessismore March 7 2011, 17:15:40 UTC
Hehe, that's part of the reason why I didn't want to just scrap this. Writing this ending was entirely too much fun!

Thanks so much for commenting on this &hearts!

(dear Lord, I use &hearts waaaay too much)

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nessismore March 7 2011, 17:17:59 UTC
I'm glad you liked them both! And haha, trust me, the most you'll see of Arthur/Eames on here is an allusion to Eames' one-sided feelings in a one sentence fic. I get why people ship Arthur/Eames, I am just not one of them. I am, however, in love with their epic bromance:p (because in my head it's an epic bromance and not just a rivalry/them annoying each other)

Thanks for commenting!

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miconic March 14 2011, 14:21:58 UTC
Oh, this is love too. This is a worthy epilogue to the fic and a standalone fic. I like the urgency and the humour that weaves through the piece. Their eventual meetup is just pure happiness. Thanks for sharing this lovely, lovely cut. I just love it :D

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nessismore March 16 2011, 16:56:54 UTC
Aww, thank you! I really enjoyed writing this section so I wanted to share it and I'm glad you enjoyed both the story and this little alternate!

<3 Thanks for commenting!

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lucksfullmoon May 25 2011, 18:01:56 UTC
I like both endings, but this one fits less with the story and more as a stand alone

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