Another Chance - Grey's Anatomy Mark/Callie Fanfic - 1/2

[only_thewinds]

“Arizona doesn’t want kids.”

Mark blinked slowly, looking up from his work at his kitchen stable. “Huh?”

Callie entered through his door, slamming it behind her, eyes wide and frazzled. “Arizona doesn’t want kids.”

Mark furrowed his brows. “But she loves kids. It comes with the profession. She’s a pediatric surgeon. How does she not

Comments

[kdmr87]

Loved it!!!! Update sooner and loooonger chapters!!!!! Amazing and can't wait to see what happens next. Mallie is freaking epic but you know that lol ;)

[only_thewinds]

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed. I'm hoping to update within the next few days, but there's only one more chapter. Sorry. :/ I'll see what I can do about the length. :P

[mactilda]

Dito!

[only_thewinds]

Ditto, indeed!

[blackberry06]

Oh! I loved it!

The break up between Callie and Arizona is weirdly one of my favorite parts, especially this → Sometimes I wish that she had done something horrible. Cheat, like George did. Betray me. Lie to me. Something unforgivable. It would be easier to forget if I could hate her. But I can’t. We just wanted different things. I can’t hate her for that. Neither of us did anything wrong; we just weren’t going to work.

Maybe because I can relate? It was bittersweet, because obviously Callie is torn up even though she's trying to move on.

And the way they sort of fell together was brilliant. And just how I imagined it would go.

Just very very good writing. I can't wait for the second part (what's up with the sudden drought of Mallie fic? -_- I'm just glad you're saving us all hahah)

Aaaand this → They were best friends with sexual tension out the wazoo. is just about the best description I've read for their relationship. EVER. :)

[only_thewinds]

I can relate to the Calzona break-up, too. Reminds me of my ex-gf. That's probably why I put so much into it. I'm really glad you liked it, I did too. It's real, you know? That's the way I see it happening on the show.

I know what you mean about the Mallie drought, it's been driving me a little nuts. Haha.

At the best description ever...hahaha, thank you. :P It's so accurate, isn't it?

I love your reviews. They're always so detailed. I'm glad you liked. :) The next part should be up in a few days - hopefully sometime this weekend.

[elise50]

I loved the way you handled Callie/Arizona and their break up. It was truly realistic and how I would think it would turn out. Babies aren't something you just change your mind about.

I also loved how Mark/Callie just went at it. It seems the way it would happen.

Can't wait for the next part!

[only_thewinds]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the way I handled Callie/Arizona. I was really trying to make it realistic.

Haha, I simply love when Mark and Callie go at it. :P

[impish_dragon]

Good job.

[only_thewinds]

Thank you :)