So, I lied. Here's one more.

[only_thewinds]

YEAH SO I LIED. One last poem. I like this one better than the last. It feels very songy. If I could play an instrument, I'd make it a song. I really want Sam to teach me to play the piano. Within the next six months. But anyway. Oh, you pass me by again.

You know the drill. Read and comment, please. Then feel free to read the other one I posted

Comments

[neoreulwonhae]

Ah, I love it. Srsly. <3

[only_thewinds]

Yay thanks. :]

[open_embrace]

more with the pretty. you definately got a gift, girl.

the second verse doesn't *quite* work... the third line is a little long (and it should be "the crimson of your cheeks...") but i agree, would make a great song.

I could give it a try if you like... i mean, my guitar abilities arent amazing, but i'd try if you wanted...

[only_thewinds]

Dude. I wouldn't say no to that.