Fic: Unwell (8/9)

[only_more_love]

Title: Unwell (8/9)
Chapter: 8
Chapter Title: I'm standing here until you make me move.
Characters: Brennan, Booth
Rating: PG-13
Summary: "Yup, the mighty Temperance Brennan was sick."
Disclaimer: Bones and its characters belong to FOX, not me. This story is purely meant to entertain. No copyright infringement is intended.
Timeline: This takes place

Comments

[mdemvizi]

Thank you so much for this! I was so wanting to know what was going to happen next!

Hoping we get fun Angela and Brennan discussing what happened :)

[only_more_love]

Thanks, Emily. :) I'm happy you're enjoying Unwell.

Hoping we get fun Angela and Brennan discussing what happened :)

Since the rest of the story is told entirely from Booth's point of view, we may not get a direct scene of Angela and Brennan's conversation.

[_faded_dreamz_]

nicely written. I liked the way you chose to write the dialogue between the two. I could picture it as if it was an episode, and to me that's important to see in writing. It's nice to see a fellow Bones fic writer keep to the show and not take it off track on a hell train. :D

[only_more_love]

Thanks a lot. I'm glad this seemed true to the characters.

It's nice to see a fellow Bones fic writer keep to the show and not take it off track on a hell train.

LMAO at your phrasing. :)

[_faded_dreamz_]

You're more than welcome. It really did.

It's sad to say but I've seen people literally try fan fiction and try to put Booth and Brennan in sexual situations and I literally went "AHHHH THIS SHOULD BE ILLEGAL FOR YOU TO DO!" It's scary sometimes. Lol.

Since its Booth and Brennan I see more that try to do it and fail at it. And then I read yours and I feel like a rock has been removed because you can actually put them together in those situations and make it seem real. :)

So lerdo gets double kudos! :D

[anadxof]

That was perfect, from the anxiety of Booth until that spontaneous kiss. "touch and taste". Now I can't wait what Brennan has to say to Angela.

[only_more_love]

Thank you very much, Foxy. :)

[fangirlgonewild]

I liked this chapter. They are playful, snarky, angsty, lovey...do I need to go on?

And - Prospect Mali! Jim hearts Pam.

[only_more_love]

Nope, you said it well. Thank you!

The Silence is awesome. *smiles*

[witchofthedogs]

Yes.