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Damn That Shinji

Jun 30, 2010 01:48

Author: Only_dani
Title: Damn That Shinji
Pairing: Kensei/Shuuhei
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: General manXman sexing. Some minor kinks.
Summary: Shinji tells Kensei he should just deal with the crush he has on Shuuhei. Kensei deals with it... In his own way.

I've never written either of these characters before so they might be a little OOC, although I tried ( Read more... )

shuuhei, bleach, kensei

Comments 7

jimaine321 July 1 2010, 06:26:13 UTC

omfg I really loved that! They were so cute! Especially Kensei. The earring thing was just adorable. I also really liked the part about Shuuhei wanting him to keep his gloves on. But my favorite line was Kensei's response when Shuuhei told him he wanted to do it. It was also a really nice contrast you had of portraying Kensei from what most people do. I like that he was unexpected with guys. I mean it makes sense for the character and it is a way to add a lever of uncertainty for the character. I've never really seen that before so awesome job! All in all I loved it, very cute very sweet and the build up with Shinji was just perfect.

only_dani July 1 2010, 08:58:19 UTC

Thanks for the lovely comments!

my favorite line was Kensei's response when Shuuhei told him he wanted to do it. It was also a really nice contrast you had of portraying Kensei from what most people do.

I kinda wanted to do him a little different from what other people usually go with. I see Kensei as more of a ladies man until he finds Shuuhei. You can still see that he likes the harder stuff but he goes easy on Shuuhei (relatively) in this one.

I also wanted to keep it a little fluffy since it was first time sex. Other times can be used for the darker stuff but first times... I dunno I think those ones should be cuter.

I honestly wasn't even expecting Kensei to do the earring thing, that just popped out at the end but I really like it. Glad you did too

jimaine321 July 1 2010, 13:20:29 UTC

Yeah don't you love it when they take over your story lol.

I completely agree about the first time stuff. I need my WAFF. I have to say that I really do like that idea, you know of Kensei just changing like that because of Shuuhei. It's so cute and stuff. I also very much agree that Kensei would be into the harder stuff. I love it in the manga when they're all talking about Lisa's pron and stuff and after one comment from Kensei she comes back with something about how he always borrows her books too and the replay from him is just a '...' I wonder what kind of '...' that is supposed to be.

only_dani July 2 2010, 08:59:22 UTC

the replay from him is just a '...' I wonder what kind of '...' that is supposed to be.

'...' means I'm getting my fill of girlporn now because soon I wont need it. I will be f*cking shuuhei for the rest of my life after I find him again.

Thread 5

wow littlebits1 July 14 2011, 04:29:11 UTC

WOW!! that's pretty much all I can say to this (in one word at least). But only one word won't do so i will keep going. I love this pairing/ship so much. Words can not define how much i love this!! You totally did there characters justice. I've been thinking for a while now about writing a story for these two I have lots of ideas for them but on the negative side I think it's one of the reasons I am having a writers block on another story i am working on *sighs heavily* But anyway thank you for sharing this and again I loved it so much
Kensei/Shuuhei=love

Re: wow only_dani July 15 2011, 05:31:22 UTC

Awe *blushes* thanks for the lovely comments. I really do like these boys, and they're just so pretty together that I couldn't NOT write this.

I know the feeling about writers block because of another story. I've developed the philosophy of 'meh, I might as well write the story that yells at me the most' because if I don't, ALL the stories just get mad and don't want to play anymore.