Moments In Time Ch. 3

[only_dani]

Author: Only_Dani
Title: Moments In Time
Rating: M - Just to be on the safe side. I might change it later though
Pairing: Roy/Older Al
word count: 2168
Series: Post FMA Brotherhood
Warnings: Spoilery, angst, boylove
Summary: Sometimes life takes you to places you never thought you would go. For Al, finding his place in the world turns out to be harder

Comments

[jazz_trousers]

*sigh* I loved this chapter. Alphonse is a naughty boy now he's big! *___*

The image you paint of blushing Mustang makes me stupidly happy for reasons I can't fully explain. He's just so.... collected usually. (HA I just totally realised why we're both also Byakuya fangirls x'D)

Anyway, the mood/tone of this is lovely and sweet and the dialogue really pops in a very cool way.
Wonderful as always, and a pleasure to be involved! *loves you this series*

[only_dani]

the blushing Mustang had to be thrown in there somewhere, the mental image wouldn't leave me alone! I think it's about the cool exterior getting blown open. (hence why I also like a flustered Byakuya, they're both so cute when they get that way)

And thankies for all the help with beta-ing this piece ^.^

[evilchuckles]

Al is so joyous in this. So lovely. This really made me smile! Thank you! I love your Al.

[only_dani]

awe thanks! Your comments always make me smile :D

[azure15]

I love this! You have such a gift for details, as well as capturing Alphonse's voice.

And I love how Roy blushed. ♥

I'm really loving this fic!

[only_dani]

I think it's my fav mental image! Al making Roy blush is just too cute.

I'm glad you're enjoying so far *huge smile*