Stealing Heaven 1/3

[only4dbsk]

Saving Him

I remember the first time I was in that house. I was crouching under the window sill, waiting for Jaejoong’s signal. Peeking in, it looked like a normal house; dining table, home theater system, cutlery in a hutch, the works. Whoever lived here spent a fair amount of time with the décor. I had seen better but I had also seen worse.

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[yceam]

omg jaechunmin????

SPOT BABY!

[yceam]

OMG *cries*
changmin looking so helpless made me tear a bit ;_;

but jaechun as house robbers? pretty unique ^^
not the usual crime they get into, LOL.

wah~ now i want to write my chap 1 too of beautiful you!!!

[only4dbsk]

*gives you tissues* there might be a few more tears

LOL! watever the crime is, if they're partners in it, I LIKE XD *is hopelesly biased*

dude, yes, write *NODS*

[tvxqforeverlove]

SPOOOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTT :D
oh yeah.

[tvxqforeverlove]

spoot... what a funny word LOL.

anyways.

d'awww minnie, what a cutie
even though at the beginning he was kinds mute-y
and if junsu's evil, at him I will shoot-y
but he can get out of that if he shakes his booty
LOLOL AWESOME RHYME PARTY
dude, wow I'm sucha smartie
motherly jaejoong is so charming
it seems to me that he's not very harming
but aww jaechun's past is so sad,
what happened to the family and their mum and dad?
and once again I must say I am hooked
you're so talented *gives you a jealous look*

meanie meena! I love it... *stares at fic* sucha good storyline *faints*. really, wow. you're another person to add onto the list of people whose brain I needa steal. but... you'll just gimme your brain right? *smiles sweetly* pretty please? :D

OMG I STILL HAVENT SENT YOU MY CHICKEN!! LOL.

I love you pudz, you smexy awesomest writer you. *smoochez* <3

[tvxqforeverlove]

oh yeah, but even if junsu's evil, I'm still gonna accept him as my husband. :D

and I forgot to mention: THREESSOMEEESYESYESYESYESYESSSS <3

[only4dbsk]

*dies*

junsu's sooo your bias and DO NOT DENY MS. I HAVE NO BIAS! your icon says it all too and after tlaking to u for a while, it's sfobvious!

your comments man, seriously, loonger than the actual post ^____^

and u know what...i cant believe im doing this...i think i actually admit defeat on this poem, i simply cannot match the pure awesomness that lies in that poem...i SWEAR! maybe i'll try in the morning, with a fresh clean head. O_____O *bows to the ultimate PUDDY*

ud be stealing heaven if u stole my brain ;DDD

send teh chicken. i cant come on msn cuz of the internet bills DX so just send me the chiken!

i love u more pudzyy!!! u prettiful junsu-whore british girl imitating a chicken you!!!

[only4dbsk]

omg ur icon *loves*

YAY! im glad u likeee :D thank you bb ♥!

[wynnetimate]

What what whaaat!

This needs to be continued asap! I'm so curious!

This is good, bb! Can't wait for more.
<3 xo
jam

[only4dbsk]

EEK!! youuu :DDD alskdj! *spazzes*
ahem. anyways.

thank you, im happy u like it <33

♥ x's and o's to you too ^^

[kingdoms_lust]

First off!! Love the Min-ah icon 2nd OMG!!

I'mma right back.. Reading.. Lol!!

[only4dbsk]

first off...what the hell are you doing up so early?? or sleeping so late.....O.o

[kingdoms_lust]

Step-dad doesn't know the meaning of STFU~!
Prick woke me up!!!

7:20am wake up call of whistling & dead weight walking around yelling at mum for his clothes.. Gotta love a nut jockey!!! *sighs*

[only4dbsk]

*kicks brent*