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[FOR TEATIMEMINT] HOW TO CONQUER YOUR PERSONAL DEMONS

Oct 12, 2014 00:19

RECIPIENT: teatimetaemint
TITLE: How to Conquer Your Personal Demons
LENGTH: 10297
WARNINGS: none
SUMMARY: Luhan is an average college student until a demon named Yixing falls out of the sky and into his life.
FINAL NOTES: I read "Yixing is a demon" and my brain took off running. Thanks for the awesome prompt!

( The only logical explanation is that Luhan is suffering from a concussion. )

!round 2014

Comments 11

lllcubed October 12 2014, 23:46:45 UTC

I love this so so so so sooooo much! I don't even know what to say about it just everything was amazing, it was so funny and cute to read ^__^ <3

helaas October 23 2014, 07:30:21 UTC

Oh my goodness, THANKS SO MUCH! Your comment really made my day <3<3<3

kojafras October 13 2014, 13:56:53 UTC

This is actual perfection.

helaas October 23 2014, 07:30:58 UTC

TOO MUCH PRAISE!!! But thank you!! :D

teatimetaemint October 15 2014, 10:23:27 UTC

/SCREAMS AT YOU
I'm making very incoherent noises right now. This was so entertaining and strangely precious! I promise I'll come back to leave the comment it deserves as soon as I have time. So this is just a spot. I'll scream at you more soon LOL
Omg, still not over their interactions!

helaas October 23 2014, 07:34:51 UTC

I was so sooooo relieved you actually liked this! I had become very worried because I... deviated.... a bit from the prompt and I think this wasn't exactly what you had in mind, but I was really inspired (your prompts were all very good, I had such a hard time choosing) and I did my best. Thanks so much for your kind words, 'strangely precious' is what I am aiming for, constantly. :D

charliebnim October 15 2014, 12:17:15 UTC

Omfg this made me laugh so much! !!!! Dudeeeeee

helaas October 23 2014, 07:36:34 UTC

Dudeeeeee!! Thanks :D Making someone laugh is always my goal while writing, so I feel very accomplished now lol

beetricks October 27 2014, 21:03:39 UTC

The prompt itself is kind of genius-our prim* angel Yixing as lascivious demon. But you really took the trident and ran with it. This was just so funny and imaginative, I can't see anyone filling it better than you did! For real, you need to make this into a series of some sort.

(*When he's not doing that hip thrust thing. Or the crotch grab. Oh, and putting those shoulders on display. Then there's showing off the thighs in those tight pants. And the body wave...

Hmmm.)