[FOR ATHARAIGAS] CIRCULATORY

[04201007]

RECIPIENT: atharaigas
TITLE: circulatory
RATING: PG-13
LENGTH: 2370 words
WARNINGS: N/A
SUMMARY: They're going to make it to the top, one step at a time.
FINAL NOTES: I hope you enjoy this!

Comments

[krishoislove]

Wow! This is beautiful!

YAS TO LAYHAN GIRL BEST FRIENDS!!! This is a story tht I can relate to a little bit, and you develop those swings from optimism to despair to hope again really well! I enjoyed reading this so much, this is a lovely work!

[atharaigas]

1) omg im so sORRY I DIDN'T COMMENT UNTIL THE LAST DAY IM SO SOASFHOISDFLJSKDF i saw the alert and i PROMPTLY FREAKED OUT but also ??!??????? tHIS PROMPT?????? YOU CHOSE THE GENDERBENT CPOP DUO ASODI;F ??!??!????? thank you thank you thANK YOU

2) and also thank you for breathing such life into this prompt, because you added a wonderful kind of tension with What has all the hope been for, if not for this? *chinhands* it was really lovely to see this kind of progression, how it (maybe? ahhaaa) mirrors the way exo grew … u___u;;

3) THE SUBTLE CHARACTER BUILDING with yixing so steady and considerate of luhan's everything but also consistently working toward her goal oMG the tangible/unbreakable paragraph about their first meet-cute, i nearly died *__*

4) and this wonderful twist with the hope in the beginning, it was so tangible and i wanted her to be happy, just because /why can't she be happy she should be happy/ and it was so great to see her work for this goal, from the beginning at "You could be someone, Lu Han

[ventice]

laughing bc ur recipient also bc u and also this fic was adorable bruh hdu