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PinCops for Maia

Oct 12, 2011 23:15

Title: I could bleed for a smile
Pairing: Pin
Rating/Warnings: NC-17, smut, a bit of angst?
Summary: It was supposed to be an easy mission. It should have gone fine. Somehow, it didn't.
Notes: For maayacola, the sweetest sweetest thing ever, who's sick and needs cheering, so I cheer her with fic, because I can't adore her more than I do ♥ Beta by ryogrande

( Yes, the title is weird, but 'Walk away from the sun' was playing when I started posting. )

p: pin, fandom: je, au fic, l: oneshot, r: nc-17, s: yamashita tomohisa, s: akanishi jin

Comments 5

maayacola October 12 2011, 22:22:01 UTC

Beside him, Jin looked beautiful and imposing in his uniform, badge shining under the sun as he puffed his chest with pride.

UNIFORMS. ALE YOU KNOW I LOVE UNIFORMS.

Holy shit I love the way you don't describe the event linearly, instead revealing it in glimpses until we get this:
but all Yamapi would be able to see later would be Jin lying motionless on the ground, blood oozing from his side and dampening his blue shirt.

And then I'm just all O.O and D: D: D: but in a good way cause i like feeling things.

Jin sighed and pulled Yamapi close again, only this time his hands cupped the man’s face instead of hugging him. “I’m fine. You can see it. You can touch me, make sure for yourself. I’m alive, it’s just a scratch, I’m not going to die. I would never leave you alone like that.”

Pin love!! PIN LOVE and also JIN reassuring YAMAPI OMG RARE.

He tried to convey everything into the kiss, fierce and urgent and demanding, and Jin laughed a little breathlessly against his lips as he pulled the man into the corridor by little tugs on his ( ... )

wintersdancer October 12 2011, 23:32:00 UTC

Thumbs up for this! (A lot of thumbs up actually :D)

I loved how you described their feelings before the mission and I love the fact that the whole incident part is blurred ♥

And I suck at leaving comments, sorry

go_chan2011 October 14 2011, 08:08:23 UTC

this was so sweet and hot! and original! i think its the first time i read an au with pin cops haha thanks a lot for writting this fantastic fic

it was an amazin fic, i love it!

ps: sorry my grammar i read this with my phone and i dunno where half of the funcions are! haha

agustin1982 October 15 2011, 11:14:53 UTC

AMUSING!! AWESOME!!

I LOVE IT ♥ ♥ ♥ THEY ARE SO LOVELY AND SO SWEEEEET ♥

starg8fan_liz March 5 2012, 11:18:01 UTC

Wonderful fic, so sweet,funny,hot,cute XD♥♥♥