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[Teen Lessons] [FINALE]

May 09, 2010 01:55

Yes, this is the end. I feel incredibly accomplished right now, since this is the first multi-chapter fic I ever finish. All that had to be said had been said before, so I'll leave it at this. Thank you for reading this fic ♥

Title: Teen Lessons
Pairing: Akame
Disclaimer: They're not mine. Sad but true.
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Kamenashi Kazuya is ( Read more... )

f: teen lessons, p: akame, fandom: je, au fic, l: multichapter, group: kat-tun, r: nc-17

Comments 78

death_note13 May 9 2010, 00:03:29 UTC

MINEEEEEEEEEEEEEE 8DDDDDDDDDddd

elanielyn May 9 2010, 11:38:33 UTC

lol *pats*

ueda_fangirl May 9 2010, 00:44:50 UTC

uwah. yamapi good job! XD jin's right kazu u did enjoy pretty much muahahaha!

d'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
the presents so awesome! hehe

OTSUKARESAMA DESHITA!! =]

elanielyn May 9 2010, 11:39:32 UTC

Thanks for reading!! ^^

[Teen Lessons] [FINALE] agustin1982 May 9 2010, 00:55:58 UTC

AWESOME! I want read this fics from the begin^^ can I read them? I love it~

Re: [Teen Lessons] [FINALE] elanielyn May 9 2010, 11:41:18 UTC

lol sure? xD It's long though.

bellemainec May 9 2010, 00:57:40 UTC

*flail* *flail* That was fabulous, and sweet, and the way it showed the trust between them was great. I liked both the fact that Kazu asked Pi about the present..and darn Pi was all over that idea.....and i liked how it confirmed for Jin that Kazu trusted him and was happy with him, and was more than happy with how things transpired as they were used and yes that scene was very very hot well done

The ear piercing worked really well, and I think the reason why it worked so well for me was because it brought full circle the idea that JIn was introducing Kame to new things, and thoughts and feelings and experiences, and even in this...Jin went first. He was happy to put himself through the pain so Kame could see what it was like and not freak out....and he did not do anything to Kame, or expect anything from Jame that he was not happy to do himself I do love the fact that the only thing that Kame gets to do first before Jin is be on top....but I think that is because Jin knows that it will hurt the first time (s) and he is ( ... )

elanielyn May 9 2010, 12:34:31 UTC

I left this comment for the end to reply properly, because I love you ♥

First things first, I'm so happy you liked it~ And that you read until the end ♥

Being tied up and using toys was something I had wanted to put in the previous chapters, only the other way around, Jin on bottom. However as the plot evolved it was obvious that wouldn't work, and I thought it would fit just fine here, after their falling out and getting back together and revealing the Yoshitano issue.

The piercing each other's ears is obviously stolen from okiita, but she let me do it xD I thought it was such a cute way to end the fic, and for them to be connected somehow, since they wouldn't be together at school after Jin graduated.

Jin let Kame top because he knew it would hurt, and he didn't want Kame to freak out and call everything off. Jin was used to it anyway, so it was fine for him. Plus he was kind of afraid of topping and messing up or something, since he had never done it. That's mostly why he always uses condoms, Yoshitano used them with him, so he does ( ... )

bellemainec May 10 2010, 11:37:12 UTC

*hugs you* you did really well with this one :) *hugs you more*

drummerlotte May 9 2010, 00:57:58 UTC

I'm sad it's over, but it was amazing ♥

elanielyn May 9 2010, 11:43:59 UTC

Yeah~ It's been around for a long time xD Thanks for reading!