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Another Sleepless Night - Jack/Ianto (Adult / M)

Sep 08, 2009 20:04

Title: Another Sleepless Night
Author: onewhodreams
Rating: Adult / M
Characters: Jack/Ianto
Spoilers: None
Disclaimer: I don’t own Doctor Who & Torchwood…the BBC does.
Story Summary: Ianto watches Jack sleep, reflects, then acts on his desires. Angsty, fluffy, smut ensues.

( Ianto woke with a start, his heart racing, the nightmare still swirling in his head. He closed his eyes again and concentrated on breathing deeply. It hadn’t been real. He and Jack were both safe and sound. There was no danger, he was safe in the hub, safe in Jack’s arms. And it looked like it was going to be another sleepless night. )

torchwood, jack/ianto, fic

Comments 15

qaffangyrl September 9 2009, 03:37:08 UTC

This was wonderful. I loved how it's uh... I guess "tasteful" is the correct word. Ya' know what I mean? WHile VERY HOT I'd call it erotica rather than porn. That's a rare thing in fanfic. well done.

onewhodreams September 10 2009, 01:11:07 UTC

Thank you so much for the comment. That is high praise. Honestly I just wasn't sure how far to take the sexual language. By holding back I guess I scored higher.

owensheart September 9 2009, 10:44:14 UTC

That was kinda hot, lovely fic.

onewhodreams September 10 2009, 01:09:53 UTC

Thanks

nancybrown September 9 2009, 18:16:06 UTC

Nicely done! :D

onewhodreams September 10 2009, 01:08:59 UTC

Thank you very much

hab318princess September 9 2009, 18:55:26 UTC

that was beautiful

onewhodreams September 10 2009, 01:09:22 UTC

Thank you, love your icon. :)

x_starfuckers September 9 2009, 18:58:59 UTC

Wonderful :)

onewhodreams September 10 2009, 01:08:43 UTC

Thanks