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ex_argh December 9 2010, 01:54:16 UTC
spot for ryukilla if you want it, bb? ♥

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ex_argh December 9 2010, 01:54:33 UTC
spot for Min^^; ♥

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hikaritsubasa December 9 2010, 05:27:17 UTC
Yes...A spot for me!!!
Love the way you wrote it...
The scenery was so beautiful...
The flower crown made Jinki a princess for Minho...
Happily living in the kingdom of flowers...
And the kiss under the water...
It was so romantic!!!!

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ex_argh December 11 2010, 06:38:46 UTC
^^ yes a spot for the lovely Min~ ♥ :DDD

Thank you bb~ I'm glad you loved the way I wrote it^^; and yes Jinki *cough* is Minho's princess LOL LOL XDD

thank you even though I feel like I forced you to comment :x but thank you so much Min~ :D ♥

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maxism12 December 9 2010, 06:28:33 UTC
I is spotting again~ ♥

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maxism12 December 9 2010, 06:55:54 UTC
/sobs.

This is was...like a fairy tale! It really was and mind you this is like the first OnHo I am reading where the both of them are involved together romantically, but this was like a fairy tale. The one where Minho is knight in shining armour and he's saving Jinki. /flails. This was perfect

It was a symphony of love, the music woven completely by their breathing, the soft rustle of the leaves, and the trickle of the water rushing down the stream.
WOW! The picture in my head is so....pretty~

It felt like pure magic to Jinki; the way Minho kissed him.
/sighs. Can I be Jinki, just this once?

Loved it ♥

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ex_argh December 11 2010, 06:42:37 UTC
Kiti~~~ ♥ :D

dkjfkdlf I dunno, this comment really really makes me happy. /cry like the fact that you said its the first couple/romantically involved Onho you've read? And the way you said 'fairytale' just really makes me happy. Yeah I wrote another prompt and I decided this could be the unofficial sequel lol. So yeah Minho did save Jinki from death XD ♥ *cough* anyway...

T_T ah I'm glad it gave you pretty images in your head~ and you bb can be Jinki just this once! ♥ :D

thank you T__T I really appreciate you reading & commenting Kiti~ esp since its not even you're otp! ^^;
*huggles* ♥ :D

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maxism12 December 12 2010, 11:11:49 UTC
Miwi~♥

This fic made me really happy~ and I am so glad this is the first OnHo that I read, because it is amazing bb, A-M-A-Z-I-N-G-!

Yes, Minho is the savior~♥

Yes, just this once~ ♥u♥

/huggles you back ♥

:D

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volatileflame December 9 2010, 07:47:42 UTC
this was utterly gorgeous ♥

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ex_argh December 11 2010, 06:43:22 UTC
thank you so much~ ^O^;

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mikaerayohiko December 9 2010, 11:31:50 UTC
lol the water part made me go crazy, it's exactly like the fanart (although... the getting naked together wasn't on my mind when I saw the awesome fanarts. Loved it anyway xO more than I could!) xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD *pictures this forever in my head*

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ex_argh December 11 2010, 06:44:35 UTC
XDDDDD I'm a pervert? 8D onho automatically makes me think dirty things? ^^;;;; yeah I thought if they're in water they should at least be shirtless but somehow *cough* became naked ^^;;;;;;

thank you for the comment^^;
♥ :D

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