a boy brushed in red pt3

[ex_argh]

Title: a boy brushed in red... (3/3)
Author: argh (@ oneuldo)
Rating: NC-17
Length: 4,673 words (total word count: 13,867)
Pairing: Onew/Minho
Summary/Notes: This is a story about the darker shades of black and white, where people are punished for misunderstandings...
Warnings: whipping scene 8DDD *cackles*
Dedications: this was written for the wonderful eechiyo ♥

Comments

[lefty_215]

I'm confused.

Why are there no comments on this? I mean, I'm new to Onho and all, but this has to be in my top list for Ohno smut I've read so far. LOLOL I'm not much of a fic commenter, but I felt this should have something.

I'll start off with the whipping thing not really being my cup of tea, but that didn't stop me from liking this. Nope. XDD

I really liked how, how should I say this, neither were super dominating the whole smut. Does that make sense? I mean, Onew top-topped, but like, they were switching up the whole time before that. IDK LOLOL And I loved Onew's anger in this. He wasn't just sad and crying in a corner or something waiting for Minho to tell him everything was alright. IDK, I specially liked that he wanted to punch him. Maybe that's weird. LOLOL

It was somewhat rare for Jinki to top, but Minho loved it when he did. He liked letting Jinki be in control, liked the feeling of Jinki taking him.

Love this whole bit. And loved both knowing just how/where to touch each other. And how they were both possessive of

[ex_argh]

^^; this has no comments because I haven't posted it anywhere else. Only on my comm ^^; (and actually I'm amazed you found the other smut, since its not even on replay now XD o__o;). I didn't feel like posting it on replay, because a lot of people don't seem to like the way I write. \shrug So I didn't even bother XDD It's probably because I like to make Onew top and break the rules XD

Yeah well the other fic of mine that you commented on? eechiyo read that and said she wanted to read the part where Onew actually punished/whipped Minho. And so she requested it and I was kind of 'OMG WHIPPING SCENE? HOW ON EARTH DO I WRITE THAT?! D:' But a friend helped me with that scene^^;; yeah sorry if it was a bit full on for you ;___

[lefty_215]

Oh~ Okay, I see now. XDD

Actually I think I saw you comment once or twice on some fics talking about how you like Onew topping, and found your Onho old comm on someone's LJ. XDDD

didn't feel like posting it on replay, because a lot of people don't seem to like the way I write.

BUTTHURT FOR YOU. DX

And don't get me wrong. I LOOOVE me some whumpage. LOL One of my favorite things, actually. I mean, I loved the AU Onho fic with cray cray creeper Onew who was eating Minho. Literally. *that weird* But I think in this context, it's not always to my tasted. But I can see why they would request it. XDD Yes.

The smut worked~ For me at least. XD

But thats probably me and my weird ideas of equality :/

Nope nope. More like real life.

No no~ I like long comments~ XDD And yes~ The feeling is mutual~~ <33

I don't know how you feel about crossover fic, but I'd at least rec this drabble here (last of the three drabbles).

In case you wanna check it out. IDK. XDDD;

p.s. I can't help but stop and stare at your icon. XD Yes please.

[ex_argh]

Yeah^^; XD \shrug tbh I don't really care 8D XDD if people read/see it or not XD

Ahh yeah probably. I used to comment on everything I read but since I noticed that most people don't care or even bother to comment I stopped too :/ XD But in the past I did a lot^^; Ah okay o_o; *still surprised* Lol. Esp since apparently in SHINee fandom one rule is that ~you don't comment on old fics~ (which I think is ridiculous -_-; if I like something - I comment regardless of whether it was posted last week or last year

AWW GEE.

[kwx3]

because its so longggg omg i love long stories give me moreeee :D
haha i think this is really nice and idk, just seems good.
i feel for minho and his ass, omg how pain is it to get whipped for smth you didnt do? and minho FORGIVED onew, WITHOUT A WORD. omg thats so minho. if it was key he would probably bitch slap jinki and ask him to flip around, whip him ten times harder and still not forgive him. HAHAHAHA.
taemin would prob just idk, scowl and pout and cry silently in bed? HAHA omg idek.
either way, good story is good, and im looking forward to more stories yo!
ps. i felt kinda bad that the person this fic is dedicated to is not commenting and i just came and rambled and everything haha so sorry friend! but i had to comment, you understand me /nods/

Re: AWW GEE.

[ex_argh]

haha XD I love long stories too ^O^;;
thank you for liking it ^^; I'm glad you thought it was good ♥

I know ;__; LOL poor Minho's ass. I was going to add more to it but because it was sooo long already I decided not to. D: Like Jinki was going to do something to make up for Minho's ass etc^^; but yeah. I didn't want it to be 20,000 lol.

Ah don't feel bad! XD I actually emailed the .pdf of this fic to her last year? ^^;; So she's already commented privately to me (in emails) (:
And don't be sorry :x I'm a chronic rambler (: so I like anyone who rambles too xDDDDD
and thank you for the lovely comment :D ♥
I really appreciate it (:

[sam_theninja24]

This story- I love it. You were so detailed, it was great :-)

[ex_argh]

^^ thanks~ I'm glad you enjoyed it. And the detail! XDD

thank you for commenting (: I really appreciate it ♥

[volatileflame]

i was going to comment on each part, but then this was just so good, i couldn't stop
omg i love you and your onho ♥♥♥♥♥

[ex_argh]

^^ thank you~~ :D ♥♥♥ glad you enjoyed it
love you too (:
♥♥♥

[ex_argh]

thank you (: glad you liked it! :D
♥ and thank you for commenting ♥