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Jul 28, 2005 17:31


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porphyre July 28 2005, 17:08:23 UTC
I want to write about an angel, but I'm not sure how. I want to find him with scorch marks black down his back in two lines and I want to find him in bed, breaking my heart with another woman, but I want to understand that it's what angels do, they can't help themselves. They leave the house and fall in love.

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onetusk July 28 2005, 21:54:27 UTC
She traces her fingers lightly down the scorch marks, finding them smooth and yet brutal, like angry tattoos. She asks, "And your wings?"

He smiles and stretches, and even the cracking of his vertebrae is musical. "Still there. Always there."

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porphyre July 29 2005, 09:13:59 UTC
He speaks like language was created soley by his speaking, as if words were nothing before he chose them.

The street is empty and she notes his scraped knees with worry. "You should come back with me, it's not safe here."

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onetusk July 30 2005, 01:29:24 UTC
He smiles and shrugs and says, "Everywhere is safe as everywhere else." And she supposes that he knows.

Back at her home, they undress each other with the tentative air of virgins. Once naked, his sex is still obscured by a blur. When she touches it, it's almost as though it were reconfiguring itself beneath her fingers. Becoming perfect for her--what she wants to touch, what she wants to feel--as if to match the rest of him.

It's almost like the pixellation that she has seen before on adult anime cartoons, and she says so aloud. He pauses as he processes this--a sliver of the Almighty pulling down some of the knowledge everything is composed of--and smiles again, finally coming back to himself. "Yes," he says, "I suppose it is a lot like that. And I...believe that to be funny."

And as she laughs with him, she thinks that if she can only keep him here. Keep him here always. Then all of that perfection could be hers and hers alone.

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scottums July 28 2005, 18:57:48 UTC
I definetly think you should expand more on this 'unlinked' theme. Have it like 'Innocents Abroad' except you know be transdimensional.

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onetusk July 28 2005, 21:57:37 UTC
Well, this is the third appearance of who I've taken to calling "The Unlinked Man." One of, I believe, two recurring characters that originated in here. There's a reason why he became unlinked, though he hasn't told me all about it yet. So you'll see more of him.

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vfcdan February 16 2013, 19:15:51 UTC
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