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Red Riding Hood's First Love

Jun 10, 2013 05:22

Title: Red Riding Hood's First Love
Pairing: KaiSoo
Length: Oneshot
Genre: Romance, Fantasy
Note: meant to be a fill for this prompt
Summary: Not every tale that begins with a Once Upon A Time ends with a Happily Ever After. Red Riding Hood can tell you that

( Jongin, the boy who emerged from the acacia tree, is a sentence mumbled underneath heavy blankets. Jongin is a thought drowned in between sipped cups of tea. He is an averted stare. Jongin is a secret Kyungsoo keeps to himself. )

l: oneshot, g: fantasy, g: romance, w: character death, p: kaisoo, s: bastardized fairy tales

Comments 39

uselessminds June 10 2013, 05:14:34 UTC

In a village far far away, there lived a boy with a red cape tied around his neck. This is his favorite possession, his mother's final gift-- a mere crimson fabric. He believes it could protect and strengthen him. His name is Do Kyungsoo. But villagers, understanding relatives, teasing friends--people who are extremely fond of him--call him Red Riding Hood, for he is rarely seen without his beloved cape, and for his height (or lack of, thereof).

THE MENTAL IMAGE OF THIS PARAGRAPH OMG I CAN'T ASDFAGHDFKSJGFJSGF

LITTLE KYUNGSOO WITH A RED CAPE AROUND HIS NECK WANDERING IN THE WOODS IS LIKE WATCHING MY CHILD GOING ON HIS FIRST DAY ON PREP SCHOOL IM CRY LIEN YOU BRING OUT MY MOTHERLY FEELS OVER KYUNGSOO AKA LIL PIECE OF SHIT WHO RUINED MY LIFE ;A; SOBS

....did i mention that i love this? no? I LOVE THIS LIEN THANK YOU /tackles you in a hug

p.s. I CAN'T WITH MONSTER CREATURE YIXING LOLZ

uberchrome June 10 2013, 05:18:08 UTC

I LOVE YOU YNA OKAY AT FIRST I WAS LIKE WOULD IT BE SHAMELESS TO SPOT FOR HER FROM NOW ON I WILL OKAY I WILL KILL U THANK YOU

/BOWS DOWN AND CRIES

orenjisuika June 10 2013, 05:14:40 UTC

Huuuurrrrr this is simply beautiful.
I like this ;~~~;

uberchrome June 10 2013, 05:18:46 UTC

AWW THANK YOU
i'm glad you liked it :)

anonymous June 10 2013, 10:33:06 UTC

I really like this. Great fill, author! I especially loved the fact that you didn't just make them get a happy ending, it makes it seem a bit more realistic. Thank you for this!

(It was raining while I was reading this so it adds so much melancholy T_T)

uberchrome June 10 2013, 23:46:47 UTC

awwthank you so much!
i'm happy you liked it somehow :)

sehun_nim June 10 2013, 14:21:02 UTC

this was really beautiful ; ;

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uberchrome June 10 2013, 23:47:21 UTC

SCREECHES DD YOU JUST DEAN ME DEAR LORD I HATE YOU THANK YOU

sehun_nim June 11 2013, 08:56:47 UTC

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depanlaptop June 10 2013, 15:00:37 UTC

Oh man. This is beautiful! Nice one

Aaaahh... i hope the kai at the end will make a move to distract the little red riding hood. Kyungsoo will see how much kai resembles jongin so much,n then they end up together lol.

uberchrome June 10 2013, 23:47:54 UTC

let's hope :)
oh and i'm glad you liked it :)