i am still somehow at a loss of words so i'll just copy what i've posted on tumblr about this so yeah
hear that weird sound? that’s me cleaning up the million tiny pieces of my heart from the floor and laughing like a maniac meanwhile because this is just THAT beautiful.
beautifully simple, beautifully raw, amazing magic of words. if i could i would make this into a song and millions would cry while listening to it on loop for days.
I am so done.
Also i'd like to quote the entire thing back at you but that would mae no sense so just "their tongues might as well be chiseled into each other. and oh god, luhan thinks they’d be a very fine piece of art. their flesh sculptured to be named: beauty in the breakdown." THIS. NEEDS. TO. BE. A FREAKING. SONG. BECAUSE. HOW.
...this was amazing and I really wanted to let you know that.
I don't know if this fic was inspired by this song but it fits really really well in my opinion. I just wanted to let you know that a song like this exists and I do listen to it on loop and cry sometimes
i can't believe myself that i haven't replied to this one yet.
oh my god, thank you. no one has ever associated my writing with some songs before and frankly, i never really thought of it but i'm sort of kinda okay i'm really pleased that you did. in some way :)
personally, i suck at writing anything in general, much less a song so if i compose one, it'd be the next 'Friday'. (which seat can i take)
I love how the pov shifts almost unnoticeably throughout and how the ending ties to the beginning.
It reminds me that people usually have reasons for acting the way they do even if one doesn't know or maybe wouldn't understand but one shouldn't just assume.
so I meant to comment on this after I first read it but failed miserably in that aspect. ><
I found this incredibly beautiful. The dramatic contrast between Luhan's concepts and thought processes regarding understanding and his situation regarding Sehun juxtaposed to Sehun, who is fighting with his own emotions and coming to terms with Luhan and the role he plays in his life, slowly coming to a different but very relevant usage of the same word 'understand' is very nicely done.
I liked how the emotions were raw but not entirely splayed bare to the characters, immediately internalized and understood, which is wonderfully realistic and well done. Though we can see how much they feel, they can't necessarily and it gives a whole other edge to their relationship.
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hear that weird sound? that’s me cleaning up the million tiny pieces of my heart from the floor and laughing like a maniac meanwhile because this is just THAT beautiful.
beautifully simple, beautifully raw, amazing magic of words. if i could i would make this into a song and millions would cry while listening to it on loop for days.
I am so done.
Also i'd like to quote the entire thing back at you but that would mae no sense so just
"their tongues might as well be chiseled into each other. and oh god, luhan thinks they’d be a very fine piece of art. their flesh sculptured to be named: beauty in the breakdown."
THIS. NEEDS. TO. BE. A FREAKING. SONG. BECAUSE. HOW.
...this was amazing and I really wanted to let you know that.
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I don't know if this fic was inspired by this song but it fits really really well in my opinion. I just wanted to let you know that a song like this exists and I do listen to it on loop and cry sometimes
<3
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oh my god, thank you. no one has ever associated my writing with some songs before and frankly, i never really thought of it but i'm sort of kinda okay i'm really pleased that you did. in some way :)
personally, i suck at writing anything in general, much less a song so if i compose one, it'd be the next 'Friday'.
(which seat can i take)
thank you, your words mean a lot :)
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I love how the pov shifts almost unnoticeably throughout and how the ending ties to the beginning.
It reminds me that people usually have reasons for acting the way they do even if one doesn't know or maybe wouldn't understand but one shouldn't just assume.
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I found this incredibly beautiful. The dramatic contrast between Luhan's concepts and thought processes regarding understanding and his situation regarding Sehun juxtaposed to Sehun, who is fighting with his own emotions and coming to terms with Luhan and the role he plays in his life, slowly coming to a different but very relevant usage of the same word 'understand' is very nicely done.
I liked how the emotions were raw but not entirely splayed bare to the characters, immediately internalized and understood, which is wonderfully realistic and well done. Though we can see how much they feel, they can't necessarily and it gives a whole other edge to their relationship.
Wonderfully done. A truly lovely piece.
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