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[lacquerdragon]

These are fifty sentences that I wrote for another community, with a Nami/Robin pairing. I'm not sure if this are all right for this sort of community, and if they aren't permitted I'll delete the post, but I'd like opinions and constructive criticism. Thanks for reading!

Comments

[voodoodoll333]

How you managed to convey so much in fifty sentences, I don't know.

Lovely. I now can see myself liking One Piece yuri. (when before I was more of a "robinz boobs hee hee big" person)

These were beautiful. I especially, rather shallowly (is that a word?!) like the 'lock' one.

[lacquerdragon]

Thank you so much. :D I have a record two opinions on this, now three, and I'm glad to hear that you like them!

that one's one of my favorites too heheh

[akai2kuroi]

I like those '50 lines' challenge, and those are really good. Some just... tell a story with so little words - I adore #44. And 'View' is just damn funny. :D (Sorry for the super late comment)

[lacquerdragon]

That's all right. Thanks for your input! :)

Re: HOMG!

[lacquerdragon]

:3 Why, thank you!

I heart Nico/Nami! Nakamalesbianluv~

[mei_yanohi]

How did I miss this? Thanks a ton for posting it, it's so wonderful! I loved every single one.