Comments | onepiece_300: Hand of Fate

velshtein in onepiece_300

Hand of Fate

Oct 15, 2009 01:04

Title: Hand of Fate
Rating: G
Media: fic
Pairing/Characters: Ace/angst
Word Count: 180
Prompt: Broken

( He still felt the same nausea... )

fiction, gen, crew: whitebeard, character: portgas d. ace, character: marco

Comments 10

shayera October 15 2009, 05:36:36 UTC

THIS. Teach's betrayal and Thatch's death, and we know upset is too mild a word for what it did to Ace... ._.

velshtein October 15 2009, 15:46:54 UTC

Thank you. ;;

naye October 15 2009, 05:38:03 UTC

Oh. Yes. This. Gorgeous and painful and. Such a good look at WHY all of this is happening.

velshtein October 15 2009, 15:47:36 UTC

Thank you~ <3

eiliem October 15 2009, 08:42:05 UTC

Ah

I don't know what to say. Ow! Oh Ace. This

under that bright blue sky that went on forever and ever and ever and ever.

freedom - ah this is so beautiful and it contrasts heartbreakingly with the rest of the piece because this is what was lost.

felt something grow colder and colder inside him until it was burning.. and shattering and snapping himself into a thousand irreparable pieces.

:(

velshtein October 15 2009, 15:48:24 UTC

dslfdjsd thank you. ;;

peachpai October 15 2009, 12:53:06 UTC

Dawwww poor Ace. ;o; Love this!

velshtein October 15 2009, 15:49:02 UTC

WHY DO WE HURT HIM SO??? Thank you! ;;

catiprojectc October 15 2009, 14:03:56 UTC

gah. this is beautifull..
Really wonderfull job on this one.
Sad but beautifull and..
gah. ;A; .. poor ace.!

velshtein October 15 2009, 15:49:16 UTC

Aww thanks. <3