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shindahotaru in onepiece_300

Apology in Disguise

Jun 04, 2014 03:01

Title: Apology in Disguise
Rating: G
Media: fic
Characters: Usopp, Luffy
Word Count: 240
Prompt: Umbrella

Hi, this is my first contribution to this community! :)

( It could’ve been anyone but no one’s as untalented at drawing as Luffy. )

fiction, character: monkey d. luffy, character: usopp, prompt, nakamaship

Comments 5

printfogey June 12 2014, 19:07:13 UTC

Man, Usopp sounds angry. Must have been some fight. But luckily Luffy's got his own creative way of apologising! :D Very sweet! ♥

shindahotaru June 16 2014, 00:42:42 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked it :D

I originally planned to explain their fight but it didn't fit into 300 words so I cut it short and leave it up to the reader :3

jadekitty777 June 18 2014, 03:06:23 UTC

Aaah, this is cute. This is sort of a childlike action that's fairly believable for Luffy. And the idea of Usopp expelling his emotional through his art is rather adorable too and something I never really considered before but I really like the angle of thought!

stelra_etnae July 12 2014, 15:51:58 UTC

It's late, but I simply had to leave a comment to tell you how much I love this. I can just imagine that picture, with the figure in the rain beautifully sketched and an awkward stick-drawing umbrella drawn above him. The contrast is visually jarring and so very meaningful, it's a great idea. Right in the nakamaship feels. <3
Someone needs to draw that picture.

sakuramar January 29 2018, 03:44:23 UTC

i love this, is so cute.

Thank you for share