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jadekitty777 in onepiece_300

The Locker Message

Oct 29, 2012 23:30

I stumbled upon this community just a few days ago, was reading all this amazing fanfiction and got randomly inspired by the new prompt. So I wrote this up last night and joined just now to post it. I'm usually a long-style writer, but this was a rather fun challenge for me. Not sure if I'm in time for the contest since the prompt was issued over a ( Read more... )

fiction, character: usopp, character: sanji

Comments 10

printfogey October 30 2012, 20:29:36 UTC

Oho! Lovely use of highschool AU and this excellent pairing! ♥ The ending makes me grin widely.

And welcome to the comm!

Edited To Add: May I ask if you've written any other One Piece fics and if so, where I could find them?

jadekitty777 October 30 2012, 23:25:43 UTC

8D I'm glad you liked it! Ironically the entire mini-story came out of me wanting to make Usopp say that last line lol. He tends to be my muse I think since all my stories are about him haha.

And thank you for the welcome ^^ Glad to have joined!

And yes, I do. Though I'm all shy about it xD
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/238029/Fire-Kitten

printfogey October 30 2012, 23:30:48 UTC

Well, it does sound like you have great taste! ^_^ *is a fellow Usopp fan* And I could see that, it's a terrific line.

jadekitty777 October 30 2012, 23:33:41 UTC

Yay! *high five* I always love finding more Usopp fans.
Also, lol, I have a similar icon how fun is that xD?

tonko October 30 2012, 23:31:14 UTC

Hmm, I think this icon is appropriate.

This was great, I really enjoy your style, and also this tidbit:

While I was copying your math homework,

Sanji, not one for doing his assignments on time?! (Or possibly at all!) Perfect.

jadekitty777 October 30 2012, 23:44:36 UTC

Daaah I love that icon! *squees*

Haha Sanji doesn't strike me as being the worst student ever (nah that would either by I-can-never-sit-still Luffy or power-napper Zoro) just rather 'It's not cooking, I don't care plus did you know how many cute ladies are in the room?!' type.
And besides, I think almost all students at one point copy off of our friends at least once xD

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it 8D

colordrifter October 31 2012, 00:02:40 UTC

Hehe, Usopp would be devious like that. ;)

Great entry and welcome to the comm!

jadekitty777 October 31 2012, 00:16:28 UTC

^
Devious? That face? Noooo.
Haha, yeah I totally agree xD

And thank you so much 8D!

synvamp November 4 2012, 20:15:29 UTC

That was great! Cheeky, fun & it captured the personalities of the nakama in question so well!

Thanks so much for joining us - I hope we see lots of you in future XD

jadekitty777 November 5 2012, 00:02:14 UTC

Aaah thanks! I'm glad it was a good read for you 8D. I just wanted an excuse to have Usopp say the last line somehow, and this is what appeared from that, lol.

And I'm honestly going to try writing for every prompt (inspiration allowing, lol). I really actually suck at writing concisely, so I figured I could use the practice!