A Simple Request

[one_winged_hao]

Title: A Simple Request
Fandom: Axis Powers Hetalia
Pairing: UK/US
Rating: NC-17/M
Summary: Alfred has a simple request but can't bring himself to ask for it. (I really wish this had a plot...I really do but it doesn't)
Notes: This was done for nasty_show, which is why it fails XD

Comments

[riiyacub]

sooooo blazing hot. I love all the little details too, like Al arranging the towel just so (mm Al in a little black towel) and the TV and Arthur being sexy just watching TV.

The bit about Art being with Al only for his body made me twinge a bit though. ....not enough to distract me from the overall hotness of course. :D

[one_winged_hao]

Aww, thank you :3

Oh, I didn't mean for it to come off horribly! I should have included some 'I love you's but ah, I didn't think anyone would read it like that. Don't worry, they are in love, all running in circles and throwing rose petals.

[riiyacub]

Ah geez, that's not how I meant to put it - comment-fail on my part. I guess it should have read: "twinge at Al's thinking that Arthur..." It just seems kind of insecure of Al or something. (And yet at the same time boastful)

[one_winged_hao]

OH! I thought I'd broken your heart by writing such a thing~ ♥

[allyoucaneater]

psssst 'Nuzzling Arthur’s neck with his nose, he cleared his throat, lowering his voice so he could whisper “Please Alfred, I want you to come inside me.”' You got their names mixed up

Other than that: *NOSEBLEEEEEDS* *FLAILS WITH GLEE*

[one_winged_hao]

Ah, yes. I've fixed it. I was editing at 4am so I missed such errors ¬_¬

But thank you~

[kasumicc]

Unf!!! That was hot indeed, good job xD Also, that was a sweet way to end it :)

[one_winged_hao]

Aww, thank you ♥ I almost didn't write that ending. It was going to end with Alfred being pissy...but I decided to be nice

[nathcoelho]

omfg
Kinky
great writtin!
=D
i love it! =)
thanks for sharing!
usuk forever!!!

[one_winged_hao]

Thank you very much! ♥

[chome_chomexx]

oh you, I know you said that I should never check out your writing, but this time I felt obliged. Even if i'm not on the bandwagon for this fandom, your writing is very good. I think you easily put me to shame. You sure know how to write awesome smutt. My fave part was the ass tonguing XDD

[one_winged_hao]

OH MY GOD SHUT UP. It really isn't very good *blushes a deep shade of red*

But thank you ♥

[chome_chomexx]

you're welcome ^^ Hope you're feeling a bit better now *hugs* my mum has a migraine tonight too and she was near passing out.

[one_winged_hao]

Negativo. Still feeling fucking awful :( Tried to lie down, couldn't get any sleep. Bleugh.