You were right - I totally totally loved this part!
Right from the beginning I was wowing. Loved the description of the Tardis, that telepathic part. Gorgeous. And I expected you to have Ianto say the bigger on the inside bit sarcastically, but you added even more!
I adored ALL the description in this and the dialogue. The description of the settlement was fab too.
The way Jack was - gorgeously done, sort of sad and distant and missing part of himself. Beautiful.
And Ianto of course - gorgeous and perfectly in character, working it all out. I liked the way you showed the wonder in him, and him feeling younger and losing his tiredness being there, cause Ianto is older than he should be.
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You were right - I totally totally loved this part!
Right from the beginning I was wowing. Loved the description of the Tardis, that telepathic part. Gorgeous. And I expected you to have Ianto say the bigger on the inside bit sarcastically, but you added even more!
I adored ALL the description in this and the dialogue. The description of the settlement was fab too.
The way Jack was - gorgeously done, sort of sad and distant and missing part of himself. Beautiful.
And Ianto of course - gorgeous and perfectly in character, working it all out. I liked the way you showed the wonder in him, and him feeling younger and losing his tiredness being there, cause Ianto is older than he should be.
dw'in garu di, cariad! Da iawn!
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Ow! *Lands on arse*
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kisses!
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Jack just casually thinking that Ianto was a ghost is kinda beuatiful, as if all the old team just "appeared" to him occationally.
This is a wonderful story.
Merci
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