Comments | oncomingscone: Above All Things

oncomingscone

Above All Things

Aug 22, 2009 10:01

fluff, fanfic, minor angst, torchwood, janto

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branwen_blaidd August 22 2009, 17:11:02 UTC

Awww! Perfect!

I was going to quote the bits I liked especially but I think I'd end up copy and pasting the whole thing into this little comment box!

Well done. The speech patterns in this are really really good!

oncomingscone August 22 2009, 17:14:26 UTC

Thank you angel pie!

stargazer60 August 22 2009, 17:39:51 UTC

This was brilliant.... Love Ianto's nervousness and Jack's ability to make him feel better...

oncomingscone August 22 2009, 17:46:06 UTC

Thank you. I do try. xxx

amand_r August 22 2009, 17:48:46 UTC

DOOD. This was sweet. I love the ending.

oncomingscone August 22 2009, 17:51:00 UTC

Thank you. Me too. It leaves certain things to the imagination.

I have another story coming up soon, involving a teddy bear.

I'm going through my fluff stage. It's taken me 6 weeks to be able to write anything at all. *suffers emotional collapse*

amand_r August 22 2009, 17:53:06 UTC

Haahahah BUT YOU'RE WRITING AND THAT IS WHAT IS IMPORTANT.

oncomingscone August 22 2009, 18:00:24 UTC

True. It could be worse. I could just be colouring in.

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hab318princess August 22 2009, 18:04:27 UTC

loved that Ianto felt able to tell Jack that, that Jack knows more than the others (Gwen)

wonderful story

oncomingscone August 22 2009, 18:13:02 UTC

Thank you very much.

Yes, I thought that would be the way it goes. Just that Ianto said "I tell you everything" to Jack in the showthatshallnotbenamed so I think this is how it should play.

hab318princess August 22 2009, 18:27:58 UTC

I love and hate the showthatshallnotbenamed in equal measures...

oncomingscone August 22 2009, 18:29:39 UTC

Me too. I think it's a passion thing.

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thrace_adams August 22 2009, 20:57:39 UTC

Oh I loved this in so many ways. I love that Ianto told Jack the truth, I love that Jack accepted it, I loved the playful banter at the end...and there was one passage in particular I loved..The bit about Rose - that was powerful.

I loved this...saving to my favorites file :) *HUGS*

oncomingscone August 22 2009, 21:01:15 UTC

Really glad you liked it. I feel strongly about people who work in shops. They're still people, with the potential of the whole Universe, after all.

thrace_adams August 22 2009, 21:02:53 UTC

I agree. I used to work in a shop - ages ago, when I was in nursing school LOL

oncomingscone August 22 2009, 21:04:19 UTC

Me too. Most students have and will continue to. And most unemployed actors, too!