Challenge #3: Musical Muse

Aug 12, 2014 16:43

Title: Poisoned
Word Count: 780
Rating: PG
Song: Judas by Kelly Clarkson
Characters/Pairings: Belle, referencing Rumbelle (and the terrible, awful, very bad, no good thing that happened)

I will not be poisoned by your actions. )

medium: fanfiction, challenge: musical muse, character: belle, pairing: rumbelle (belle/rumple)

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redrockcan August 16 2014, 21:31:24 UTC
Great fic!! I can so see Belle being torn up by Rumple's betrayal, you captured her emotions perfectly. I feel so bad just thinking about her finding out about his lie and we know she is going to eventually find out. :( Excellent work and great choice of songs!!

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sanalith August 17 2014, 17:47:19 UTC
So I finally read this and ouch ouch OUCH!!! :(((

But yeah, pretty much spot on. I love how you focused on the worst part being that he really DOES love her, and yet he STILL betrays her. The makes it so much worse. *sigh*

Lovely work as always!

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