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[mykindasong]

On this lovely Spring day (we hope it is, anyway) we welcome you to the...

The Johnny's Fanfiction Concrit Meme
THIS is where you get to tell me about my writing.♥ Comment for yourself only. Do not make threads for other people

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[nightbaron079]

nightbaron079 at scribbleascore . I haven't written much or posted in writing comms but here's~ my (incomplete) masterpost (still under construction). Most of my new works are in my writing comm already so there :)

I mostly write HSJ and I've written an Akame fic once, and still getting to the stage when I can write for Arashi and Juniors and other groups. Pairing most frequently used would be YamaJima, and then it'd be xOC stories. Would love to hear feedback from anyone on how I can improve my writing! :)

[lovemeiru]

SO hi. I'm not a good writer but I definitely enjoy reading fics that have potential :D

AND YOU my darling, write potentially great fics. Nah they're actually pretty awesome already (I mean HEH, FOR THE FANDOM YOU WRITE FOR WHAT THE HELL MAN YOUR FICS ARE WAY BEYOND GOLD) You write wonderfully, and although my personal preference lean mostly on fics that have snarky voices in them, I really enjoy yours, too! They feel... I dunno, fresh? And very coherent, wonderfully constructed, etc.

One thing I noticed from few of the fics I've read from you is your tendency to reuse the theme "childhood friends". TBH it's a totally overkilled theme but on the good side you manage to write them in a way that doesn't make readers roll their eyes with here we go again. So, it's still cool! Just maybe try to venture other kinds of relationships too?

BUT THEN AGAIN I did say that I've only read a few lol, like that HikaSakiOC fic and JUMPxOC so maybe it was just a coincidence too sobs

[nightbaron079]

First of all, THANK YOU FOR COMMENTING AND NOT USING THE ANON OPTION. So I could properly express my gratitude :) I thought my thread would be hopelessly empty, and it's very nice to see the mail alert for this in my inbox :3