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[mykindasong]

Happy Halloween~!

Welcome to the...

The Johnny's Fanfiction Concrit Meme
THIS is where you get to tell me about my writing.

Rules are simple, because we like it that way. And I like just copy and pasting~♥ Please to be commenting for yourself and yourself only. If another writer doesn't want to be on here, don't put them here! Also, please

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[anonymous]

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[fangirlism_era]

fangirlism_era @ randomjuxtapose

I've been frustrated with my writing lately.

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[carmine_pink]

Hi, I haven't read a lot of your fics but from the few I did read I think sometimes you use too many terms like "the sexy Osakan", "the prodigy", "the genius", etc. They sound rather awkward especially when you repeat the same term several times throughout a single fic. Also, it would be nice to include more descriptions and imagery, as they can make your story more 'alive'. Hope that helps :)

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[fangirlism_era]

It totally helps. I hadn't been aware that I was using those terms so many times. :) And I'll work on including more descriptions and imagery on my fics.

Thanks, I appreciate it. :D

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[anonymous]

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[grydo2life]

grydo2life @ xborn_of_ashesx

But for the love of God, go easy on me. I'm still learning how the JE fandom works XD;

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[kataomi]

I love what you are writing ! Just continue as you do with Tegomasu *_* . Thanks for writing CHU CHU CHU

Re: G

[grydo2life]

Awww, thank you sweetheart♥ I always adore your comments. And don't worry; I'm definitely going to keep writing for TegoMass~!

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[anonymous]

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[anonymous]

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[hime_cwaaaan]

love all your crack fics <3

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[hime_cwaaaan]

wait, am I need to do this in anon? :|

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[anonymous]

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[jamie_spotty]

jamie_spotty ----> Is where you can view my fics. It's ALL Akame.

I know about my update issue and my love of adjectives.. but what else do you think?