- The Meme In Which You Give Concrit -

[mykindasong]

Okay, ignore that we're ignoring the usual set-up. It's just not the way we roll! Don't worry, the same things can still happen.

Welcome to the...

The Johnny's Fanfiction Concrit Meme
THIS is where you get to tell me about my writing.Rules are simple, because we like it that way

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[anonymous]

 

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[myjulien]

Requiem is seriously quite possibly one of your best works and it's still being written (I LOVE the structure, just so you know, and it really gets me excited for more). Sorry if that sounds presumptuous but I really did think, "Wow when she comes back, she really does with a bang." I really liked Inertia too; I love how you crafted their dynamics.

I can't actually decide if I like your chaptered fic more or your lone shots, really. You make me feel rather a lot with the latter. I love the rush I get from the former.

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[catacombkid]

Ah geez, I really don't know what to say to your comment. But *blushes* thank you. I'm glad you like what I've been doing so far. I hope that I can continue with the momentum! (But seeing as I have a crap ton of papers due and it's the end of the semester here, I have no idea how frequent I can update. OTZ)

But thank you! I hope that my one-shots can continue to thrill and my chaptered fics can continue to induce emotions from you. <3

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[anonymous]

Thank you so much for writing From Dusk 'Til Dawn. I only just read it recently (linked from jeauthormeme) and it blew me away. Currently going through the rest of your repertoire, and I love how diverse you are.

I do spot minor tense and spelling&grammar issues here and there in your fics, but it's nothing a beta can't fix. Hope you'll write more!

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[catacombkid]

Thank you for giving me a chance. ^^ From Dusk 'Til Dawn is probably one of my most well-known work in fandom co-written with one of my best friends in fandom. We really enjoyed writing it so I'm glad you enjoyed reading it too.

I notice that about my writing too. Sadly English isn't my native language and I do try very hard to proofread stuff to the best of my abilities. Although sometimes I do admit that I had probably missed certain things. I'll try to be more cafeful as I write!

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[alexiela]

As I've said before and I will say it again and again; you have a talent with imagery, it makes it so clear in my mind I can actually feel it.

I miss your writing though and I'm so happy I saw your name here ♥

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[catacombkid]

Awww... Thank you! I've actually started a new series. I just haven't post it to the comms yet. So if you're looking for new reading material... you're feel free to read that! Even though I'm probably going to edit it before I post to the major comms.

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[astrangerenters]

I've only read your Sakumoto stories since I don't read a lot that's out there, but I love the way you write them. As someone who favors the pairing, I do find myself going back and seeing how you've tackled them as a way to compare and contrast my own style :) :)

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[catacombkid]

Thank you, although I don't write Sakumoto much. But I'm glad you like the way I write them. <3

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[chibakawa]

Ohyasssssssssssssss. That's basically all I write.

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[carmine_pink]

carmine_pink

For the record, I just started writing JE fics late last year. And yes, fluff is my middle name :D

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[allodole]

cruelmonster :3 ? not yet much, but oh, well.

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[anonymous]

I've only read your Bruno/Naruse fics (though others are on my list!) and I have to say I enjoy them a lot. The tempo and pacing is nice and you have a good handle on narration. The only crit I can give, really, is the posting style. The paragraphs are oddly spaced and not really paragraphs at all? Such as:At first, Naruse doesn't pay attention to the man. The lobby of the hotel is crowded, as usual. Fancy people in their fancy clothes, nothing he hasn't seen before. All the noises- the clinking of classes from the hotel restaurant, his own footsteps on the mirror-like floor- all of these drown the strange man's voice at first.
"Hey, you!" The unfamiliar voice yells and this time, Naruse's stroll towards the elevators comes to a halt. With a tiny, almost unnoticeable frown, he turns his head and sees a man, perhaps something over twenty years old, come closer, a skip in his step.
Would read a lot smoother as:At first, Naruse doesn't pay attention to the man. The lobby of the hotel is crowded, as usual. Fancy people in their fancy

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[allodole]

First, thank you. :)

Ah, that's my mistake, I sometimes happen to overlook this. I usually try to separate the paragraphs enough, to make it easier to read. (I find it irritating myself to read overly-long paragraph).

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[columbin3]

columbin3 @ atashi.no.fanfics~

hmm, I don't really think anyone knows me around here..
I'm still new and just written a couple of fics, w/ one still ongoing.
But I'll really appreciate if you give comments on how I write, I'm not really confident about it.. neh~

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[chii_loves_me]

chii_loves_me who really needs to change her username.