The Vortex Boys, Chapter 2/?

[onabearskinrug]

Title: The Vortex Boys
Author: onabearskinrug
Rating: Teen
Characters/Pairing: Ten/Rose with LOTS of others
Summary: Rose Tyler, a writer for Smash Hits magazine, gets the opportunity of her career when she's chosen to go on tour with the new teen sensation The Vortex Boys. What happens when appearances aren't really that deceiving after all?
Author's Notes: My

Comments

[crystal_roes]

Two things. One; Whew! I need a fan just after that last bit! MAN, you can take just a little thing like a smile and a cheek kiss and turn it into something definitely guh-worthy!
Two; I tried using the chapter two link from my friends page, but it didn't work (it was from your time-and-chips post). You should probably check up on that...
*eagerly awaits more*

[onabearskinrug]

HEEEE! Thank you so much for the compliment AND for the note. I think I fixed it now :-) I hope you like the rest! :-)

[tkross23]

Can I just say first how much I LOVE this?! All the characters fit their parts so well (well Adam is a bit more outwardly slimy but that works for me). If only they were a real boy band. *sigh*
And sure, Rose - John is staring at you because "he doesn't like outsiders coming into [his] boy band universe." I don't think so! Me thinks that he likes what he sees, as is made quite apparent by the end of the chapter. Their chemistry is scrumptious and I totally agree with crystal_roes that you managed to make a cheek kiss "guh worthy."
I am happy to see that Rose will be proved wrong about most of her assumptions.
Looking forward to more :).

[onabearskinrug]

I KNOW RIGHT??? THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!!! HEEE! I love your comments! Just posted four today, five might take a while as the rating will probably increase...*wags eyebrows* :-)

[tkross23]

Thanks! I get to read two chapters at once! Being busy pays off sometimes ;).