Ring Around the Rosie, Chapter 10/?

[onabearskinrug]

Title: Ring Around the Rosie
Author: onabearskinrug
Character/Pairing: Ten/Rose with Jack, Mickey, Jake, Pete, Jackie, and others
Rating: Teen this chapter
Summary: The Doctor and Jack are stranded in London when the TARDIS malfunctions and, based on the Doctor's alien gifts, open a psychic detective agency. When an old serial killer comes out to play, it's up

Comments

[larxene_12]

Omg, Mitchell is such a nerd xD Total nerd move, bro, total nerd move.

Another one?! This murderer is a sicko. I still suspect that creepy ring seller at the renaissance fair. Why haven't they followed up on him yet?

Rose is the cream to his coffee... hee... these two are so adorkable.

Can't wait for your next update!!

[onabearskinrug]

HA! Yeah...he's a bit of a nerd... :-P

He IS a sicko. Interesting that you suspect the creepy ring seller...wouldn't that be something? :-P

LOL...when timelord1 and I were plotting this out, all I could think of was the cartoon Doug...do you remember that one? He did a music video and sang a song for Patti? "Patti you're the ketchup on my hot dog...Patti you're the ice in my tea!" So I'm giggling picturing the Doctor being like "Rose is the cream in my coffee! Rose is the sugar in my tea!" I'll find the youtube link if you have no idea what I'm talking about... :-P

[gallifrey_eire]

Mickey and Jake had tried to play the “tough cops,” finally sending Rose in when they had no luck.

I love that when Mickey and Jake are out of their depth, they turn to Rose for her...feminine charms. Exactly in character, all of them!

Everything about the Doctor in this chapter was beyond perfect, from his jealousy to his mug-trashing skills to his 'interrogation' of Mitchell!

Of course, then that murdering git had to go and murder again...

On pins and needles over here!

[onabearskinrug]

HA! They need Rose to GET STUFF DONE! :-D

I have to say...I elaborated a bit, but most of the interrogation was inspired by kelkat9. I was SO STUCK about how they would get him to crack and she came along and was just pretty much brilliant and spot-on about everything :-)

[onabearskinrug]

Thank you, darling! Isn't his timing awful? You'd think he was doing it on purpose or something! :-P

[othermewriter]

Oh poor Rose! I so hope that Mickey has this wired up so the Doctor and Rose can get on with mixing that cream up with some sweet sugar.

[onabearskinrug]

HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!! OMG I love that! Things are actually winding down here...I don't think they'll be able to fight it for much longer... :-D

[fogsblue]

Meep! Poor Rose, having to deal with another murder. Must be hard.

But her and the Doctor, very adorable conversation there :)

[onabearskinrug]

Aw thank you, darling! It must be hard...she's a good detective, but she's still finding that whole "emotional detachment" bit difficult. The Doctor will be there to help, though! :-D