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onabearskinrug

Rose

Dec 18, 2011 17:23

Title: Rose
Author: onabearskinrug
Character/Pairing: Ten/Rose
Rating: G
Summary: 'Rose' with a certain...pinstriped twist
Author's Notes: Written for challenge 91 over at then_theres_us, photo prompt 9. Muchos gracias to the best gals ever, kelkat9, timelord1 (who I blatantly stole some lines from), and who_in_whoville for all of the help and encouragement with this!
Disclaimer: I do not own Doctor Who ( Read more... )

writing, doctor who, fanfiction, challenge

Comments 14

wphorseluver December 19 2011, 02:20:30 UTC

Loved it! :) Did Nine actually say the bit about possibility versus probability in the episode or did you come up with that yourself? I loved that part - I could just picture Ten saying that with flourish and overenthusiastic eyebrows. :)

onabearskinrug December 19 2011, 02:25:55 UTC

Oh I'm so glad you liked it! Nine did not actually say that in the episode...his response was just "No" :-D

I did come up with it...kind of. More like adopted one of my husband's typical speeches to be a bit more Ten-esque :-D

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onabearskinrug December 19 2011, 15:50:08 UTC

Thank you, darling, and thanks again for the help! I'm outlining the next story as we speak...:-)

kelkat9 December 19 2011, 03:50:33 UTC

I loved it! Well done you! You captured a perfect mix of 9 and 10. I especially grinned at this "licked Mickey right across the cheek."

onabearskinrug December 19 2011, 15:50:58 UTC

He would lick him, wouldn't he? :-) I just couldn't help myself

larxene_12 December 19 2011, 21:28:27 UTC

Yeah, 10/Rose! This was super adorable!

onabearskinrug December 20 2011, 00:42:43 UTC

Thank you so much! This AU Challenge was SO MUCH FUN! :-D

Review, Part 1 silverlunarstar December 19 2011, 23:42:43 UTC

Then Dan the Security Guard handed her the lottery money.

I ♥ you. You gave a five-second-appearance character a name.

She opened her eyes and only had time to register a man with unruly brown hair tugging her towards him

ROFL! While the eye-catching attribute of 9 is his gorgeous blue eyes (well, when facing only his face... XD), the first thing that would catch one's attention of 10 IS his great hair. Especially Rose's attention, REALLY great hair. Haha.

“Oh, you’re still here.

Bleh, he so would say this.

His eyes softened a bit at this. “I’m the Doctor. You?”

“Rose. Rose Tyler.”

“Rose Tyler,” he repeated, the ghost of a genuine smile gracing his lips for the first time since she he took her hand.

Okay, so he was aggravating me a little, but this part totally made me melt.

Unless you’ve got breast implants or something…

Bwuahaha! XD

His grin widened. “Well, certainly anything could happen, but now you’re talking probability versus possibility. There is always that 50-50 possibility that anything could or could not happen ( ... )