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JE fic: Looking For A Dream - Part I [Jin/Kame; R]

May 31, 2007 07:06

Title: Looking For A Dream - Part I
Author: momo (omoshiroina)
Pairing: Akame
Summary: au; Kamenashi Kazuya is just a boy searching for inspiration. Nothing more, nothing less. In this part, there is an inevitable breakup. Jin and Kazuya slowly get to see each other, bit by bit.
Notes: I'm aiming to finish this at parts 4 or 5, and I swear it gets longer ( Read more... )

momo, akame

Comments 8

cabernet_shiraz May 31 2007, 15:27:00 UTC

This is beautiful. As much as I am rooting for more and more and more Akame, I kinda feel sorry for Yuichi. I hope he finds someone who will love him as much...

Jin doesn't tell Kazuya that in that small instance he is thinking that he will lose Kazuya if he demands too much.

Ack...how bittersweet. Kazuya can be such a heartbreaker...:P

More, please! ^_^

sumomo_yuki May 31 2007, 15:48:45 UTC

Awwww Jin is being insecure.... and I love the poetical sense of the way you write!!! It's awesome!

samenashi May 31 2007, 16:26:37 UTC

I always tell you how pretty your writing is but it is so true. :( This fic is really different to your usual style, too, it's kind of fascinating. It is really slow and sweet or something. :( MORE SOON.

omoshiroina May 31 2007, 16:36:19 UTC

Idk why, but my style changes depending on the type of feeling I want to convey. It just...does. Like words just type themselves and I can't really stop them ajdkaldjdk. This piece is pretty slow. :(

Damnit I wanted this to be epically plebey but it seems as if my powers aren't enough for 20 chapters of constant sex. D:

tia_junan May 31 2007, 17:25:37 UTC

"Artists," Yuichi says in reply, partly teasing, partly accepting and wholly bitter.
...Jin's tone triggers a burst of velvet tenderness in his heart.
"The future, eh?" Jin doesn't sound skeptical or mocking at all. "The future is only a trap in your mind, you know."

Done so well, nothing wasted. The writing is so thought out that it becomes a beautiful reality where I'm a fly on the wall watching and listening.
Thank you for your lovely fic. Your next update is much looked forward to by me. joy to you, ki

shiny_satsuma June 1 2007, 09:23:53 UTC

ohman..yuichiisalwayshurtisnthe.. T_T

and Kame keeps comparing them... T_T but jin is very intriguing..