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Against the Wind :: Chapter Eleven

Jan 06, 2006 05:16

Title: Against the Wind
Author: Rhea Logan
Rating: PG-13
Genre: drama/angst/suspense
Status: Chapter Eleven
Summary: [Sequel to Absit Omen & Desperado] Brilliant minds don't go unnoticed, Watari learned after his death. Pulled into the Mother Project soon after, he let his ambition loose. Thirty years have passed, the deal is long gone. But is it? ( Read more... )

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aluragayle January 6 2006, 18:48:02 UTC

Eeeee!
“GenSouKai,” he whispered to himself.

I was right! I was right! *lol* I nearly jumped outta my chair when I scrolled down and read that and confirmed my own speculations! ^.^

Another bang-up job, m'Shinigami! *heart* Love it!

*wantsmorewantsmorewantsmore*

enchanter January 6 2006, 18:50:50 UTC

I was right! I was right! *lol* I nearly jumped outta my chair when I scrolled down and read that and confirmed my own speculations! ^.^

It's not nearly as easy as it sounds, though. :P >:)

Glad you liked it. :) Thanks. ♥

daedra_lord January 10 2006, 10:28:08 UTC

Well no wonder we like Mother if Mother is Watari! *glomp* Loved loved loved that part of the 'revelations'. No wonder she protects him like that...and oh, what a trump card Watari has now. Enma's not gonna be too happy with the unfolding of future events, methinks! (Serves him right too, the bastard, even if he's hot and a god and all :P)

Touya is cool...I hope she's good cause she's nice and we wouldn't want Watari to be betrayed. Smart girl to shut Watari up and get him to talk alone, by the way...Watari should have thought of that in the first place :P

And HA! You have managed to constrain him to wearing contact lenses...nice one :P Just dont make Tatsumi die drooling next time he sees him. Man, that's gonna be one reunion. Can't wait xD

And the explanations were good too. My non technical mind struggled with some parts but I think I got everything xD In other words, great as always and HURRY UP AND WRITE MORE! :P I read this late so now I'm expecting the next chapter soon :P

enchanter January 18 2006, 13:06:28 UTC

Enma's not gonna be too happy with the unfolding of future events, methinks! (Serves him right too, the bastard, even if he's hot and a god and all :P)

::g:: Well, Enma has kind of overstayed his welcome in the UpperHand!Land, don't you think? ^^ It's an even match, though, so don't be too sure of anything just yet. ;)

Watari should have thought of that in the first place :P

Normally, yeah. Under those circumstances, not necessarily, actually. You try and collect yourself and think about everything in a situation like that. :P

And HA! You have managed to constrain him to wearing contact lenses...nice one :P

::chuckles:: Actually, I didn't really plan that - my Watari insisted. The scene just popped up in my mind and I had to write it. >.< Suits him in just the right ways, though. ^^

My non technical mind struggled with some parts but I think I got everything xDLOL, good. I tried to keep the technical parts as easy to understand as possible, but between Watari and Touya, both of whom know what they're talking about, even ( ... )