Simplicity

Jan 18, 2014 17:25

Title: Simplicity
Pairing: Yonghwa/Seohyun
Genre: Romance
Rating: nc-17
Summary: Fear or happiness? Which do you choose?

This one-shot contains explicit content. If you aren't over 18 or if this Yongseo genre is not your cup of tea, please do NOT read it.

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senseless kissing, one-shot, romance, nc-17, yongseo

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meluvyuya January 23 2014, 13:00:01 UTC
wow this is a mix of fluff, comedy and rated.... kkkk. the scene when hyun parents suddenly come is hilarioud! i'm sure that they are frustrated and the way yong to forget his "poking member" is so funny! lol. he mumble ban ki moon over and over... kkkk.
wee... and the next scene is so hot! but it ended in sweet way.. they choose to be happy. and i want yongseo to be happy too :))
thanks for this ^^

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omgirly January 24 2014, 04:42:30 UTC
I didn't announce this fic and wondered when someone was going to stumble upon it. :) Thanks for your comment!

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dizzzy_07 January 24 2014, 10:01:06 UTC
Hahaha! Sweet, funny, hot and romantic, all in one. Congrats, well-written rated fic. Thank you for this.

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omgirly January 24 2014, 13:44:10 UTC
Thanks so much for reading my attempt at a rated one-shot. I really appreciate your comment and hope you'll stop by again.

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lyre_27 January 29 2014, 07:35:12 UTC
just the perfect mix of emotions~
it's a one-shot but you wrote more than what you intended
and you remind me sooooo much of sylvia day!
im not very fond of yongseo rated fics but yours is an exception~
thank you for this and write some more!
*clapsclaps*

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omgirly January 29 2014, 17:01:33 UTC
Thanks so much for dropping by and leaving a comment! I'm glad you liked it. I am always sensitive about writing rated content about Yongseo because they are so beloved, so I tried my best to keep it consistent with my style of storytelling, showing the full range of emotion associated with togetherness.

I don't know Sylvia Day, but now that you've mentioned that I remind you of her, I should check out her work. The reference is definitely humbling, so thank you!

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cursed_0417 January 29 2014, 18:07:11 UTC
belatedly found out about this fic.
your works are never a disappointment.
it had the right mix of lightheartedness, fluff, & steam.
its not just senseless smut, there was a great build up leading to it. :)

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omgirly January 31 2014, 17:49:26 UTC
thanks for the kind words and for dropping by to read it!

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ext_2070516 January 30 2014, 04:44:50 UTC
I think this fic was written wonderfully! I mean from most fic writers, I've noticed they have a particular genre they excel in, in your case with this R-rated fic, you can write smut and fluff! I SUPER LOVED THIS FIC!! Also, I read in your twitter you will try to make an angsty fic?? It would be really nice how you will be able to pull through since as you said, you have done it only once?! ( correct?).

I really like the way you write omgirly. Thank you so much for all the fica you have written for all the gogumas.

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omgirly January 31 2014, 17:51:35 UTC
aww, thank you so much! i'm trying to breach the confines of comfort, so the latest, Home, was my attempt at angst. it didn't turn out that way, so back to the drawing board. :)

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